If it says "Humor and Satire" don't be expecting a 'story'.
Can't believe they allowed it to be posted.
I rated as interested in gay. not sure that's right - im straight. but I like to look.
I came here from the author's current submission which even at 20 pages left me wanting to read more of that story. Then to find this gem which is so different from that one, but equally enjoyable. I can't wait to read more.
I wonder whether for some readers this had too much of the element of truth to be funny.
Actually this was quite insane. Hilariously insane. Nerds are fun.
Of course he's too busy dreaming up some esoteric comment about a lousy story to be bothered to notice that this story is a complete trainwreck. I don't think I've ever seen something this badly rated or with so few "views". It appears to be averaging about 325 people reading the chapters at this point. Not even Samuelx or Edrider get bashed this badly. UGH!
He doesn't like the story OR the commentators. Poor Nony is mad at the world. The rest of us are still laughing at Nony and this silly story. Not only is it badly written and conceived, it keeps going and going even though the scores tell us how bad it is.
Anonymous, you don't make sense.
Well written. and a good imitation of the old detective stories.
I enjoyed it well.
This and a few other pieces were written in the tone of Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book", which uses Listing Style recounting snippets of personal experiences during a dark period of history. Most people will never encounter Listing Style for personal narratives.
You mix up Mike and Trent too.
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