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Read first the Category title!

If it says "Humor and Satire" don't be expecting a 'story'.

Sick rantings

Can't believe they allowed it to be posted.

Not quite right

I rated as interested in gay. not sure that's right - im straight. but I like to look.

One word...WOW

I came here from the author's current submission which even at 20 pages left me wanting to read more of that story. Then to find this gem which is so different from that one, but equally enjoyable. I can't wait to read more.

Too realistic perhaps....

I wonder whether for some readers this had too much of the element of truth to be funny.

Yeah

Actually this was quite insane. Hilariously insane. Nerds are fun.

Ha ha - not even Fanfare made it this far.

Of course he's too busy dreaming up some esoteric comment about a lousy story to be bothered to notice that this story is a complete trainwreck. I don't think I've ever seen something this badly rated or with so few "views". It appears to be averaging about 325 people reading the chapters at this point. Not even Samuelx or Edrider get bashed this badly. UGH!

Nony makes more sense then the story.

He doesn't like the story OR the commentators. Poor Nony is mad at the world. The rest of us are still laughing at Nony and this silly story. Not only is it badly written and conceived, it keeps going and going even though the scores tell us how bad it is.

poor Anonymous

Anonymous, you don't make sense.

Nice one

Well written. and a good imitation of the old detective stories.
I enjoyed it well.
HP

Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book"

This and a few other pieces were written in the tone of Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book", which uses Listing Style recounting snippets of personal experiences during a dark period of history. Most people will never encounter Listing Style for personal narratives.

Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book"

This and a few other pieces were written in the tone of Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book", which uses Listing Style recounting snippets of personal experiences during a dark period of history. Most people will never encounter Listing Style for personal narratives.

Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book"

This and a few other pieces were written in the tone of Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book", which uses Listing Style recounting snippets of personal experiences during a dark period of history. Most people will never encounter Listing Style for personal narratives.

Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book"

This and a few other pieces were written in the tone of Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book", which uses Listing Style recounting snippets of personal experiences during a dark period of history. Most people will never encounter Listing Style for personal narratives.

Your names

You mix up Mike and Trent too.

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