A sparkly, tongue-in-cheek gem of an essay. You rock!
WHAT KIND OF PERVERTED WHACK JOB ARE YOU. A CORN HOLIN IN BRED AC-DC FUCKTARD. YOU SUCK AND YOUR STORY SUCKS WORSE, QUIT WRITING YOU HACK.
THAT YOU ARE ONE SICK FUCKED UP PUPPY. YOUR STORIES MUST BE AN AUTOBIOGRAPHY. DO READERS A FAVOR AND DELETE YOUR SHIT AND NEVER WRITE AGAIN.
IT WAS NOT GOOD AND KIND OF RETARDED. IF I WAS HIM I'D GET CHECKED FOR SOME HORRIBLE PERMINANT DESEASE. WAS IT SENSUAL AND EROTIC. NOT REALLY MORE LIKE PHYCHOTIC.
well written & nicely crafted , but highly unusual for one series to shift so radicaly in writting style , direction & focus .
am wondering if you were involved in a research project & that the purpose of this series was to dissect & analyse the comments & feedback .
the outrage &disgust @ ch.01
the celebratory smirks & jerks @ ch.02 & 03
the deafening silence @ ch.04
will continue to read & finish this series , but its currently leaving me feeling slightly used by the Author .. (lab rats R not us) lol
wow great story,
turned upside down & totaly reversed from what i was expecting .
firm believer in equality,whats gd for the goose, is good for the gander :)
funny how all the haters&flamers don't spew the Vitriol when its the guy fckin the Ass off as much pussy as he wants ... but they go absolutely Ape sht , when a wife fcks around ...
anyhow loved the story .. the mis quote , was the only tiny downer , pulled me out of the good place i go when reading your skillfully written stuff, but only momentarily , & then i was buried in it until the end.
dive in , submerge , be absorbed , lose track of time ..
soooo hilarious ,
loved it , does not do it justice
i can't remember the last time i laughed so much or for so long
can't stop smiling lol ..
i really hope you return to this series @ some point .
am not usually a fan of humor/satire/comedy in its written form ..
but this is something very special & truly remarkable .
i can see myself revisiting this series from time to time if/when i need cheering up.
ty for writing/sharing it with us
damn i skipped these before , did not think they would interest me .
revisiting Lynns profile i decided this time round to read all the posts.
really glad i did , this had me in fits of laughter from start to finish .
lynn should never have posted this , could have earned good money selling it as a comedy sketch script for tv /dvd ., or even a play .
all the works done & it all takes place in bed between one couple ,
lynn , lynn , lynn .. get this to a screenwriter or comedy playwright it's to good to leave as just a Literary piece.
This was too funny! I had a great time reading it and I really enjoyed the authors voice. I especially liked when the narrator stepped out of the story and directly addressed us readers. Felt more like I was talking to someone than reading a story. I especially liked all the small details, the monotonous details for "the good buddy" that made me think of him as a real person with a bi wife. Loved it! If you want to laugh out loud, read this story!
I loved the voice in this piece, and I really felt like I was hearing a story and not just reading one. I feel like our narrator (I don't think I ever got his name. that's pretty cool) is a guy I could hang out and get a drink with. He seemed pretty normal and relatable. Everything in the story seemed like it could really happen. Actually like it did happen. Makes me wonder if the author took the old saying "write what you know" to heart and just put down a memory. If that's not the case, than I'm doubly impressed :) Overall, I really liked it!
I thoroughly enjoyed this. I smiled and giggled (a bit) through the whole reading. I admit to playing damsel-in-distress with my hubby. Its fun and while he knows that there isn't much I cannot do, he enjoys playing my knight-in-shining-armour. Fun, laughter and playing makes a sometimes hard life easier to bear. I really enjoyed this writing piece!
this one left me a bit confused , nice angle on the topic , not into the N word , so that did spoil it a bit for me ,
each time you used it , i was lifted out of that special place i go in my brain when reading well written storys .
gave it 4 star vote.
p.s to the haters&flamers ...
stop bitching about other pples work & get off your ass & write something
LOL! What can I say? Tell your "friend" it could have been worse...
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