OH my god, I shot at least 3 loads into my bitch. 2 in her pussy and 1 in her ass while / after reading this story. Fortunately, I got her tubes cut to avoid any "little" problems after the pussy shots . She does not like anal especially when she is tied down and you fuck her ass w/o enough lub in there and then shoot your wad .
That's what "mdwdirect" called it, once again showing that much of Literotica's readership cannot distinguish between lectures on morality and smut for entertainment.
The story was well-written; fluent and articulate - and not entirely unlikely. Amanda was attracted to Rich and curious about anal, and the setting - sun, wind, water, being aware from the crowd - why not? Daddy is a little fucked up, no doubt about it - but a woman getting butt fucked for the first time is highly unlikely to have the psychological fall-out of getting fucked vaginally for the first time, in identical situations. Amanda liked it - she'll do it some more. She didn't like it - she won't.
And the author is to be commended for knowing and telling how women get off during anal sex. I gave it 5 stars, and I don't do that very often.
I like the simple detail in this story. Lacey is highly erotic, and many woman experiment with double penetration. Just keep everything clean and you can avoid a yeast infection. Plus, she eats yogurt which doesn't hurt her system; in fact it helps the character in her position. All in all, this was a quick and steamy read. I liked it and I'm a woman.
It is simple,i love a cock fucking my bottom,not arse bottom.I go looking for it,i am 52,rather plump,especially around my bottom.I go to the local dance clubs,i know i am almost double the young ones age that go there but i wear sheer pantyhose,a black skirt that only just covers my bottom and i dance lifting my arms,my bottom exposed.When i see a guy staring,i dont care what he looks like i say to him if you want it follow me.They do,i go staight to the handicapped toilet and walk in,i lift my skirt and they get a good look at my bottom,i turn around,take their cock out,believe me their are some big cocks out there,suck them,i then stand turn around and as they move forward,i reach for their cock and guide it to my prepared bottom and push back,opening for them,their cock pushing into me.I love the feel as thier cock enters my bottom,if they are thick i have my first orgasm now,pushing back onto them,hard guys fucking me.They fill me,no trouble.One night,i had already had 5 hard guys shoot in my bottom when i saw a tall guy look at me and look away,i went over to him, and said want it,he seemed shy,yes but ,come on,up i went.We got onto the toilet,i pulled my soaked pantyhose down,i turned,whats wrong,my girlfriend wont let me put it in her bottom,i smiled,unzipped him,hell i could see why.He was a good 8 inches,fine but he was almost that in width,the head narrow but the rest shaped like a bottle,i sucked only the head,then turned,i held him still and pushed back,he entered my well fucked bottom,i pushed back and immediately i orgasmed,my pussy flooded as he spread my bottom like no cock before,ohhh,there was pain,exquisite pain as i heard myself screaming,oh fuck me,ohhhh,and he did,hard,fast then he filled me,i felt it,his cock swelled and absolutely flooded me with great suction noises,i couldnt help it,i lost control as a mixture of my orgasm and urine emptied from my pussy.He kept going,help me,he helt huge,so good,he just kept fucking,i dont know for how long but by the time he pulled out i couldnt walk properly and each time i clenched my bottom,i orgasmed.He helped me out,are you alright,do you need a lift home or something.I nodded,he took me home,i convinced him to stay,i fucked his cock all night,the best was when i sat on top of him,pushing my bottom back onto his cock and rode him most of the night,even after he had cumm in me,i wouldnt get off.He stayed with me for 7 months,then a younger girl got hold of him.Now i take any cock in my bottom,but it is ruined,nothing stretched me like his.
This is probably the best series of just about anything I ever read,I read this nonstop,all 6 chapters and man I want more, I hope for the love of god you don't end it here
Hell I am not afraid nor ashamed to admit it! In fact...I have made it very clear that I want this...been trying for so long that I am bout ready to pay for it
As if there needed to be anymore proof this was written by a guy. Women don't usually talk like that. Still, that's fine if you just meant this to be a somewhat arty Penthouse Forum letter. But if you meant it to be a real story that just has sex in it you should try to assume the voice of the character more. I like the simplicity of its style though. A real gut fantasy. And of course I liked the title.
PS- To the commenter above, lots of prostitutes and johns have sex w/out condoms. Many guys actually pay more for it. It's stupid, but they do it. I could especially see it happening w/ a regular who leaves "big tips". That part is realistic.
a woman WILL get a nasty yeast infection from going back and forth between orifices like that. Also, neither a prostitute nor a john wants to have unprotected fucking...it all sounds too much like a guy's fantasy.
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... still waiting on Chapter 8 ;-)
So good..,, So believable
This story was nicely written. Syntax was perfect, and the story was relaxing enough to be believable. Very nicely done!
Sorry I waited so long to comment.
I had to wait till this one to comment because the stories are so good I couldn't stop reading. Great work.
Horrible
This is disgusting.it made me what to vomit.thanks
ANAL SEX
OH my god, I shot at least 3 loads into my bitch. 2 in her pussy and 1 in her ass while / after reading this story. Fortunately, I got her tubes cut to avoid any "little" problems after the pussy shots . She does not like anal especially when she is tied down and you fuck her ass w/o enough lub in there and then shoot your wad .
A fucked up story?
That's what "mdwdirect" called it, once again showing that much of Literotica's readership cannot distinguish between lectures on morality and smut for entertainment.
The story was well-written; fluent and articulate - and not entirely unlikely. Amanda was attracted to Rich and curious about anal, and the setting - sun, wind, water, being aware from the crowd - why not? Daddy is a little fucked up, no doubt about it - but a woman getting butt fucked for the first time is highly unlikely to have the psychological fall-out of getting fucked vaginally for the first time, in identical situations. Amanda liked it - she'll do it some more. She didn't like it - she won't.
And the author is to be commended for knowing and telling how women get off during anal sex. I gave it 5 stars, and I don't do that very often.
This was hot
I like the simple detail in this story. Lacey is highly erotic, and many woman experiment with double penetration. Just keep everything clean and you can avoid a yeast infection. Plus, she eats yogurt which doesn't hurt her system; in fact it helps the character in her position. All in all, this was a quick and steamy read. I liked it and I'm a woman.
Trust me, I'm an engineer.
hehehhehe
Only a 5
I gave this story a 5 because I couldn't give it a 10.
Great anal fun for everyone!
thanks
69er
It is simple,i love a cock fucking my bottom,not arse bottom.I go looking for it,i am 52,rather plump,especially around my bottom.I go to the local dance clubs,i know i am almost double the young ones age that go there but i wear sheer pantyhose,a black skirt that only just covers my bottom and i dance lifting my arms,my bottom exposed.When i see a guy staring,i dont care what he looks like i say to him if you want it follow me.They do,i go staight to the handicapped toilet and walk in,i lift my skirt and they get a good look at my bottom,i turn around,take their cock out,believe me their are some big cocks out there,suck them,i then stand turn around and as they move forward,i reach for their cock and guide it to my prepared bottom and push back,opening for them,their cock pushing into me.I love the feel as thier cock enters my bottom,if they are thick i have my first orgasm now,pushing back onto them,hard guys fucking me.They fill me,no trouble.One night,i had already had 5 hard guys shoot in my bottom when i saw a tall guy look at me and look away,i went over to him, and said want it,he seemed shy,yes but ,come on,up i went.We got onto the toilet,i pulled my soaked pantyhose down,i turned,whats wrong,my girlfriend wont let me put it in her bottom,i smiled,unzipped him,hell i could see why.He was a good 8 inches,fine but he was almost that in width,the head narrow but the rest shaped like a bottle,i sucked only the head,then turned,i held him still and pushed back,he entered my well fucked bottom,i pushed back and immediately i orgasmed,my pussy flooded as he spread my bottom like no cock before,ohhh,there was pain,exquisite pain as i heard myself screaming,oh fuck me,ohhhh,and he did,hard,fast then he filled me,i felt it,his cock swelled and absolutely flooded me with great suction noises,i couldnt help it,i lost control as a mixture of my orgasm and urine emptied from my pussy.He kept going,help me,he helt huge,so good,he just kept fucking,i dont know for how long but by the time he pulled out i couldnt walk properly and each time i clenched my bottom,i orgasmed.He helped me out,are you alright,do you need a lift home or something.I nodded,he took me home,i convinced him to stay,i fucked his cock all night,the best was when i sat on top of him,pushing my bottom back onto his cock and rode him most of the night,even after he had cumm in me,i wouldnt get off.He stayed with me for 7 months,then a younger girl got hold of him.Now i take any cock in my bottom,but it is ruined,nothing stretched me like his.
What a fucked up story
I have a little girl. This shit made me want to puke. I didn't bother finishing the first page.
Congratulations, you got some emotion out of me.
Oh god
This is probably the best series of just about anything I ever read,I read this nonstop,all 6 chapters and man I want more, I hope for the love of god you don't end it here
aint afraid..
Hell I am not afraid nor ashamed to admit it! In fact...I have made it very clear that I want this...been trying for so long that I am bout ready to pay for it
"my swollen beef curtains"
As if there needed to be anymore proof this was written by a guy. Women don't usually talk like that. Still, that's fine if you just meant this to be a somewhat arty Penthouse Forum letter. But if you meant it to be a real story that just has sex in it you should try to assume the voice of the character more. I like the simplicity of its style though. A real gut fantasy. And of course I liked the title.
PS- To the commenter above, lots of prostitutes and johns have sex w/out condoms. Many guys actually pay more for it. It's stupid, but they do it. I could especially see it happening w/ a regular who leaves "big tips". That part is realistic.
a guy's imagination
a woman WILL get a nasty yeast infection from going back and forth between orifices like that. Also, neither a prostitute nor a john wants to have unprotected fucking...it all sounds too much like a guy's fantasy.