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Not nearly enough stars to give!
The way this odd take of an old tale (or TAIL, have it) "seduced" the reader was brilliant. When i first saw the story was 14 pahes, i nearly gasped. But, just after reading the second paragraph, i knew i'd be in till the end. I'm now an official "Xarthy"
It's the person that we love and loves us. If we try, we can find what we love about them. We can't control what attracts us but we can control our taste, our smile, our vocabulary and style. We can flirt and be open, friendly and honest. If we do these things, eventually someone will see our beauty. Then we just might see theirs.
Plus; I like big butts and I cannot lie!
You other brothers can't deny! When you see a little girl with a feminine waist and a round thing in your face you get sprung!
Ooh baby I wanna get witch ya and tack your picture!
So turn around, stick it out! Even white boys got ta shout!
Just re-read, for 3rd time...so surprised didn't leave a comment before..
LOVED this, and her, and Brett, and Ma...her not caring what was dripping down her thigh
easily 5 and fave, and going into my All-Time Faves folder
PS Gotta use whatever at hand...recall famous scene in a movie it was butter-gotta use something, regardless how all porn 'just use spit..'-NEVER be enough...
I thought it was excellent. This wasn't intended to be a novel. It was a hot, sexy story, enough backstop to make it readable. And damn, the sex was hot! Thanks for sharing this! 5*
Good premise.
But sex was sooooo rushed.
No foreplay?
No kissing/making out/touching/fondling/teasing?
Needed much more touching/fingering/playing with her asshold. Wit step-by-step details.
Needed her doing stuff to his cock to be sure it'd fit.
Needed detailed lubrication of his cock -- and her asshole -- before penetration.
Three stars.
I almost love the writing style. I like your attempt to create a hypnotic quality to the fucking scenes by using word and image repetitions. I do think it becomes monotonous at times, a bit numbing maybe, but I really like what you're trying to do. Maybe you can refine the style even more in your next story.
I would maybe try including a greater variety of details at various times, and maybe not focus so intensely on the dick in the vagina in every sex scene. I mean, that is the way breeding takes place, so I get it.
Anal sex with someone you care about and trust can be an amazing revelation. The sense of giving yourself up so intimately for their pleasure and your own too in defiance of irrational convention creates a mighty human bond. Your story conveys this very well. Thank you for the p!easure.
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Latest 15 Reader Comments
Not nearly enough stars to give!
The way this odd take of an old tale (or TAIL, have it) "seduced" the reader was brilliant. When i first saw the story was 14 pahes, i nearly gasped. But, just after reading the second paragraph, i knew i'd be in till the end. I'm now an official "Xarthy"
Ha, ha, ha. A bit over the top, but funny.
I love where this storey could go, please continue. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
It's the person that we love and loves us. If we try, we can find what we love about them. We can't control what attracts us but we can control our taste, our smile, our vocabulary and style. We can flirt and be open, friendly and honest. If we do these things, eventually someone will see our beauty. Then we just might see theirs.
Plus; I like big butts and I cannot lie!
You other brothers can't deny! When you see a little girl with a feminine waist and a round thing in your face you get sprung!
Ooh baby I wanna get witch ya and tack your picture!
So turn around, stick it out! Even white boys got ta shout!
Baby got back!
Thank you to everyone who left nice comments !
This series has been absolutely incredible
Just re-read, for 3rd time...so surprised didn't leave a comment before..
LOVED this, and her, and Brett, and Ma...her not caring what was dripping down her thigh
easily 5 and fave, and going into my All-Time Faves folder
PS Gotta use whatever at hand...recall famous scene in a movie it was butter-gotta use something, regardless how all porn 'just use spit..'-NEVER be enough...
Hope you write some more about these three doing perverse things together.
I thought it was excellent. This wasn't intended to be a novel. It was a hot, sexy story, enough backstop to make it readable. And damn, the sex was hot! Thanks for sharing this! 5*
Good premise.
But sex was sooooo rushed.
No foreplay?
No kissing/making out/touching/fondling/teasing?
Needed much more touching/fingering/playing with her asshold. Wit step-by-step details.
Needed her doing stuff to his cock to be sure it'd fit.
Needed detailed lubrication of his cock -- and her asshole -- before penetration.
Three stars.
I almost love the writing style. I like your attempt to create a hypnotic quality to the fucking scenes by using word and image repetitions. I do think it becomes monotonous at times, a bit numbing maybe, but I really like what you're trying to do. Maybe you can refine the style even more in your next story.
I would maybe try including a greater variety of details at various times, and maybe not focus so intensely on the dick in the vagina in every sex scene. I mean, that is the way breeding takes place, so I get it.
Thanks for sharing. I love witch stories.
I hope the next chapter gets posted some day.
Intense. Nothing beats the feeling of being strap-on fucked deep and hard
This is not a lesbian story, it should not be under the ‘lesbian anal’ tag.
Anal sex with someone you care about and trust can be an amazing revelation. The sense of giving yourself up so intimately for their pleasure and your own too in defiance of irrational convention creates a mighty human bond. Your story conveys this very well. Thank you for the p!easure.