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ONE DOWNSIDE TO ANY FETISH

that in itself is an addiction, usually the ultimate and uncontrollable, TK U MLJ LV NV

Really good

A lovely piece of writing, I was hooked from the first line!
I agree with Dutch girl that I was left wondering just how submissive she was, you portrayed the emotions excellently.
My only problem was the lack of a safe word, this is a necessity in any D/s activity even for the most experienced of subs.
I loved the chapter though and eagerly await the continuation.
Thank you.

Fuck 2nd person narrative

Fuck 2nd person narrative

Thanks to all for the feedback

Thanks to everybody for the public and private feedback.

I'm offline for 2 weeks but will definitely be continuing this story soon.

SO HOT TO SEE REAL EFFECTIVE REVENGE!

A really good one...showing how to "get 'er done"...!!!!

Chap 17

I've submitted chapt 16 to my editor Tues night, so hopefully it'll be posted by this weekend. I've also got 10 pages of 17 so there won't be a long wait! Thanx for being patient.

The best I've read in a while

Skillfully written and unique. You definitely have my interest piqued!

awesome story

love the ending, leave us all hanging, why don't you?

It was good but...

In some paragraphs it was a little to worded and I found myself skipping through most of it. It had a good story line to it. I want to read more of it though.

thanks to all

Mel, your words are very encouraging! This is my maiden voyage as an author, I'm a storyteller but not a writer, so it was so very encouraging to read your comment soon after I posted the story. Like the real person that 'nancy' is based on, she is indeed a game gal and I am proud to call her mine.

Califdaphne, thank you for your comment. You caught me on the realism, this story is loosely based on fact. Sort of a 'composite submissive' fused from many people in my life. Yes, there are more chapters as 'nancy' becomes more and more involved in the lifestyle.

Dutchgirl82, you see very clearly the major point of this first chapter. And, like the 'nancy' in what passes for real life, this is the story of a person's journey into the BDSM lifestyle, including (I hope) a lot of the misgivings and fears.

I'm confused

Love the story.
I've re-read the last few stories. I never remember them going to the play as referanced in the last chapter. Nor do I remeber puppy getting the cast off her arm.

lame

Wow, dumb to the end. Sorry. Writing is good though. Content poor for my specific taste. Shoot the wife

lasagna recipe

Great series...but I have to ask the no cooked noodles lasagna recipe....does it exist and does it work?

Splendid!

This: "she wanted it this way. She wanted him to tie her, to tease her, to make her body and mind uncomfortable. She hated it and loved hating it. Loved hating him. Loved hating the way Thomas, Sir peered into her soul and pulled out the things that put her most on edge and tamed her with them. Against her will. And totally in line with her desires." is without doubt one of the most succinct and perfect descriptions of what BDSM can be. And the shaving scene is one of the most erotic and imaginative things I've ever read.

I do have one minor editorial observation; early on there is a place where you say she moans against the gag, but I don't see where he gags her.

Thank you!

Mel_pomene,
Thanks for the warm thoughts (and the stars), Mel. I appreciate the encouragement. I'm not sure if there are anymore stories rattling around in my noggin, but I'll be happy to share if something should pop up!

BearsLady,
Thanks for the continuity catch, as well as your words. I really appreciate it! Edit to fix, has already been submitted.

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