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Certainly better that 50 Shades

I stumbled onto your story by accident but have found it a great read. I do hope you will continue it as it resonates with my thoughts on BDSM completely. Well - I hope I don't have to be rich and famous to play the role of Eric. Thanks for your efforts.

What am I to do now?

I messed up, I starred it with a 4 and I meant 5!! I never in a million years expected to stumble on a site like this and find a real story with plots and character development! You are extremely talented, and I hope you never put that to waste. This is one of those stories I would purchase if I ever were yo stumble across in the future. Thank you for leaving no questions unanswered!

5+!!!

What a great combination of pain and humiliation! I love how many directions your stories can go in. Some of the best I've ever seen. Thanks for the great read!

I hate this....

My master does that to me all time... it's not my fault that I work early in the morning and he doesn't get off until late... I can't help if it I fall asleep before he gets home

Adding my feelings

DITTO ! to what everyone else has said already,
What a writer, we have a winner.
Tom

I actually really enjoyed this. I want to see more of these characters and their relationship dynamic.

Love this story!!

I have to say that there have been maybe 6 stories in all over the last 4/5 yrs that I really want to read till the author feels finished with the characters and this is 1 of them. The whole series's has been amazing from being to present.
I hope that the new guy at the end dosent give Bella more legal drama but lovely I site to her self. And I hope that perhaps now Rob can look for a new girl for himself. I would like to see that :)

don't see a ptoblem

VMA, i like the pace you are developing this story. gives me the opportunity to think about your characters and the situations as they occur. Wondering and fearing their back stories.

Really Appreciate . . .

your insight in the Behind-the-Scenes on Literotica. Naturally, those of us not struggling with the process ourselves, are & would remain clueless without authors' sharing. Thrilled to know more is on its way.

Too many promising tales are never completed & unsuspecting readers find themselves left hanging, unsatisfied & aching for resolution.

Your characters are attractive & engaging without being cloyingly shallow. Your back-story clues entice us deeper, leaving your impatient fans whining in their frustration.

Thank you for sharing Melissa & Erik with us.

Great Story.

I loved the originality. I also appreciated that the domination was playful and painful, though not (particularly) demeaning to Luke. I look forward to the sequel with the company manager. Keep up the good work.

Loved it as always!

I'm a little sad that Rob is being added into the love concoction because I'm routing for Bella and Stephen! But as always a great read :-)

Funny as all get out!

VMA, this chapter made me laugh right through it.

The hesitant uncertainties of Megan wrestling against the mischievous seduction by Penny. Is comedy gold!

Wondrful

I love your writing. I anxiously await each installment and I'm never disappointed. Good work !!

Loved this

This was great. I am an anal masochist, I have applied Vicks to MYSELF. And all of that wasn't that rough. I've had rougher than that. I've been forced to cum seven or eight times before. That was before we even GOT married. Some people like this stuff, lay off the hate comments.

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