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holly shit

As i read this my master tied me up and fisted my pussy then when i got to the pissing part he dumped piss all over me

So she can abuse him and he likes it?

Well, if she really wants to fuck him up, why not divorce him and make him sign outrageous alimony? Then he can live in a homeless shelter while she can date someone she respects and who actually respects her...because this...this...travesty isn't respect, it's masochism.
It's like the saying: "How do you hurt a masochist? When he asks you to hit him, say no and walk away."

"You have no safeword right now, my pet."

That's a declaration of war. Sorry, but in my world, that bitch gets beaten until vengeance is satisfied. And I can be extremely vengeful.

hi writedoctor

Hey, glad to hear that these two women were able to get another happy client, by remote control, it seems....

Appreciate the feedback, it offsets the troll on another story...
you = 5. troll = 0

And another thing...

....(won't he ever shut up?) that I like are the realistic details of your writing, VMA. I think it is important in the BDSM genre to emphasis 'sober' consensus.

In my opinion defining SSC as 'Safe, Sane, Consensual' is a misnomer. (I do not mean misconception.) Alcohol, usually combined with other drugs, is used all to often to self-medicate psychological illnesses.

Many years ago and in another location, my wife and I explored the local scene and players about our interest in B&D.

We discovered that at best we had only a mild interest and only with playing with one another, once in a while. Switching back & forth as the mood moved us.

Several years after my wife passed away, I groped around for something that could re-motivate my sex drive. When I checked out the BDSM scene in my present location. What I found really killed all desire for me to adopt the lifestyle.

Here the dominants & masters were drunken abusers and the supposed submissives and slaves were prostitutes enduring abuse to pay for their drug addiction.

So I just get by reading the varieties of pornography about fictional depictions of BDSM. Good writing, interesting and emotionally mature characters. Humor and good sense all are what I seek in my choice of erotica.

Nicely done

Great continuation of a very sexy story. Each one is simple, vibrant, descriptive, an arousing. Perfect erotica, will be interesting to read how he controls, humiliates, and loves you in future episodes.

Very good!

VMA, I really liked how you directed this chapter. The trolls of the world win if decent people are not willing to marshal the courage to stand up to the vermin that infest society.

OMG

What? WHAT?! After all that hot sex you go for the heartstrings?! You maniacal, devious, lovely woman. I adore you, I just adore you, and this was so hot and I need to find someone to spank me. SHEESH. So good.

Fantastic!

Love the s-l-o-w play/tease. Magnificent pace. Left me very hard and pleased.

What I admire...

...anout this storyline, VMA, is that you are fearless about exploring the individual psychology of what motivates your characters.

That Ginny & Katy each have their own personalities and history. Even the secondary characters such as Betty and Nancy are slowly being revealed as individual persons. Even Brian is rendered interesting.

In my opinion, these type of stories (no matter the kinks) could be categorized as Life Stories.

Like a river, this genre sweeps on, always changing, never ending. Twisting and turning, maybe for a while trapped into an ox-bow, eventually swept away by high water.

The great river of our mingled lives as it curves back and forth across the landscape of the world.

Very enjoyable

Wonderful read, and well written. Loved his shyness, and how he was paraded before, and used by, a number of beautiful older women. The one thing missing for me, particularly in a milking story, was some anal/prostate play. The position on Daphne's table especially cried out for it!

Good story.

What a sensuous story. I liked it and look forward to the ever evolving relationship. Keep going!

very good start

He introduced the idea and gave her time. It works wherever you go from here will be a good progress

Get an editor

And cut this drivel in half. There's simply nothing erotic or interesting about this mess.

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