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hottttt

Soo hot and such a great read .. couldnt help myself from finishing at the end with them. Would love to read more!! -Brit

Great story!

I have no idea why someone with no idea of the lifestyle would waste their time even looking at this category, let alone make ignorant comments. Ignore them.

I thought it was a great,well written story and look forward to reading more from you.

Great series.

I enjoyed this series so much, I read it all the way through in one day, then had a terrific orgasm before I went to sleep!

I think I LOVE emily!!

@always_yes, thank you so much for your comments, i haven't blushed so much ever!!! Chapter 3 was submitted this morning so fingers crossed it will be up by the weekend.

My favorite few sentences from this story . . .

. . . "He continued to pound inside of me as his hand gripped either side of my tiny throat. I lifted my face up in obedience. I imagined his hand was the collar I longed to wear for him".

Wow. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I don't want Marcus back!

I agree with another comment, I started to feel bad for Marcus, but this chapter scared me. No love triangle, please!

Edited chapter is up!

The updated version of Rock and Water - chapter 7 is now posted. Thank you again to MJ, Findmyway, and FA_JF for their constructive feedback. Without it, I wouldn't have written the new restaurant scene which is a much more accurate reflection of the consensual relationship Patrick and Corrine share. If anyone would like a copy of the original chapter, please do not hesitate to PM me.

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Your FIRST erotica?! Holy crap, you are a pro, the teasing, the intensity, the submission, please more! We crave your beautiful, descriptive words

Yes!

More please! That's all I can say, it's such a good start! :3

Sorry

I couldn't finish it. The storyline itself, which I didn't particularly care for, wasn't the worst part. The typos and grammar errors are what killed it for me. This needs a serious proofread.

Speaking of the storyline, the main character just does not seem happy. She seems like she hates her life, and if that's the case, then why the hell is she still cooperating with all of this?

Ok, I have to admit I kind of felt sorry for Marcus for a while. I hoped he would see the error of his ways and try to earn Thalia's trust again. But he's a psychopath. I don't ever see him changing, and I think the cat and mouse game that is coming is going to be wild!

Almost

The overall idea is a good one, however you should take more time to explain what the house is and the people in charge, slow down the story and get more detail into it.

All in all a good first draft.

So fun!

I love how fun she is and how you made us move right along with her in craving more from MA! PHEW! I definitely want to see more of MA and Silky! When is chapter 3 posting? Hmm? Hmm??

!!!

I can't believe you started writing and didn't broadcast it across the airwaves!! I've always looked forward to your comments and am so intrigued by this story! You have real skill in description, I could see and feel all of it which is fantastic (and I'm sure will translate deliciously into scenes with MA!). Definitely looking forward to more lady!!

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