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Slated for deletion

Folks, I wrote this up yesterday, 11/27, and submitted it before retiring for the evening. In the light of day I've decided that I don't much like it and have asked to have it deleted. Sorry to have wasted your time with it.

VMA

When I think that very often people are an effed up crazy ass mess then this makes a little sense. I do not understand the prolonged game with Anna. Are they stopping her or not? Getting Loren to safeword is important but if he is going to be a dom or at least cares about her he ought to be more protective of her. He seems happy to just watch her struggle and it is disappointing and scary to watch.

Very Good

I loved your story...the build up and culmination was excellent, thank you

You did it again!

You proved again how good a story teller you are. BDSM is definitely not my cup of tea and I surely would have passed it by if I didn't know how good you are. This brought back memories of Mark and Megan and I remembered all the members of the circle except Tonya. She must be new or I missed something along the way. Great story! Only five stars because I couldn't figure out how to give you more.

The "reconciliation" with her brother, thanks to Mark's powers of "gentle persuasion," was a good touch and you managed a happy ending to a very dark story line.

Kudos! Very well done. I'll drop you an email. JJ (My new user name is bluejay83)

amazement

this was such a beautiful story, i became so aroused and felt my body going into cunvulsions and having a hard time breathing from wanting to experience the same thing by the end tears where rolling down my face. to say the least i was beyond pleased. your amazing. i look forward to reading more of your work.


-Cara

Could be good but.....

The idea of the story is great, but you need to make it grammatically correct in order to make it good. There is a real lack of punctuation, making it hard to identify when the characters are speaking.

Odd

Where are the gerbils?

Tasty!!

Really hoping for more from you!

Very Good

Very Good start...

More!

More more more!!! Pretty please, fell in love with this story.

Not the only one?

That's not the first time I've heard of a Master liking blood. Mine does, but in this story, it's not true BDSM. BDSM is a kind of relationship between a Master and his submissive. There's more love and trust.

Good story...

I have read some of your other stories from another genre and this was the first BDSM one, so I will try to figure out which of the others are from the circle. I hope we get another chapter telling about her punishment for Amado or whatever his name is and how her life changes now that she is having fun and talking to her niece.

very hot

Great detail in her treatment. Very visual in my mind. Thank you

Pushing limits

Carrie was pretty tough on John on his first night under her total control.

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