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SENUAL ??? - I agree Not in the least SENUAL :))

Good start

Well. Assuming that this is, as titled, only the beginning then I thought it an excellent start. I'm very keen to follow Denise's descent. Let's hope its a LONG way down and VERY dark at the bottom. Well done.

It's great because...

I love how explicit sex isn't even part of it. How well you capture the movements of thought in the moments before surrender. A woman would be happy to have a partner with the sensibility of the narrator

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Spanking watched

My wife spanks me for her fun. It hurts but it's not over the top. She makes me wear panties all the time. My spankings begin with them on and removed during the spanking
Recently she had a long time friend stay the weekend. After a few drinks her friend said you are fresh. Bif you were my husband I'd spank you. To my embarrassment my wife said I do spank him. Next thing I'm bent over a chair with my panties on and my wife spanking me with a hairbrush. Then she said her arm was tired and had her friend spank me. As she hit me my wife lowered my panties. The spanking was embarrassing but having my panties down by my thighs was worse. They had me stand in the corner with my panties rolled down. Embarrassing but exciting

Total crap

Erase the bad comments all you like. This was still lousy.

Does it not occur to you

That these guys would react badly in your stories? That the women would likely end up in jail, the hospital or the morgue? Really stupid stuff.

When he got loose?

He beat the crap out of the bitch and never saw her again. The end.

I'm STILL laughing!

Any idiot knows the cage is a toy. A simple tool found in any house removes it in under 15 seconds. Just awful.

Mike puts his dick in his mouth - he bites it off.

Good thinking Mike! Then Mike becomes Bubba's bitch in prison and Carla spent he time in jail withering away. Simon got everything in the divorce since Carla was a convicted felon. What a dumb bitch.

Great writing.

I doubt anyone could have written this better!

Great story, but getting dark....

Really great story, but the tone has shifted a lot from the naive upbeat fun of the first chapters. Hoping this is just a plot arc, and not a new trajectory. Also rather liked having one of the girls a Domme, made the group much more complete. *****

Of course he had his I-phone on the whole time(Doesn't everyone?)

On Monday he went to see his attorney, then they went to see the Big Boss. They explained the lawsuit and Jane was called into the office. Of course she denied everything until the recording was played. She was terminated immediately and escorted from the premises. By the time Mike was finished with his lawsuit he had millions from the Company and had ruined Jane completely. His Civil Suit against her got him 6 figures from her and her insurance company and ruined her reputation forever. Not bad for a little pain. He was set for life. Stupid story.

This chapter was my favourite!

The last scene was so incredibly hot I'm not sure I have read a better sexless sex scene ever before.
Fab job!

more please

I was trying to read the series slowly to make it last longer but I couldn't help myself and now I'm finished. I really need more Marcus, James and Kalen!

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