Looking forward to your next installment, Katie. Played with myself while this was going on and loved Cindy's cumming. Bet you get plenty horny writing this delightful stuff, don't you? Do you have a nice hard cock available to you to take care of that horniness?
if through her promises and seduction, she was setting up this trap for him.
Outstanding! This story was excellent: enough background to set the scene, enough detail to get the reader into it, and enough loose ends to leave us wanting more... Thank you for writing and sharing it!
I have a special fondness for stories of strong young girls who assert themselves as I'm a strong feminist. Any male who isn't is by my definition an unethical person and a shithead. Being a feminist simply means being fair. That's all. I'm a Guy.
I really like the plot line so far and the characters.
Thanks for a Great start on this Tale
It was a lot of fun to read this, since it is very different and very original.
.... Simply put: Fuckin' Amazing
It was short and sweet (and obviously hot!). I liked the rustic feel to it. There goes another from your Survivor's list ;)
I hope that more of this will be coming.
It works for me, too bad that Kari had to get killed for it to work.
I am not going to make any suggestions, you are the author, write the story, we will either like it or won't like it. I wrote a possible scenario for 'Robs's Revenge', Chapter 4 and you won't even WRITE Chapter 4. I love your stories, most of them but I refuse to play your game on this one. If you were interested in what we think you would have responded to the several who asked you for that Chapter 4 in 'Rob's Revenge' (it is one of my favorite Just Plain Bob stories). Thank you for writing them.
Well done. This was a very good read.
All I can say is WOW! Thats one hell of an anniversary present. Other than a couple of spelling/editing errors I thought it was well written. Keep up the good work.
Your writing style in this peice has a hint of Karen Traviss in it. It was an excellent read! If you are still actively writing, you should get published
now what's that other girl's name. . . inquiring minds want to know. ;) Welcome to the chain, a great story for the Bus! ~ Red
A very different story....liked it...quite erotic and very imaginative. Thank you.
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