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hmmm

is this minx by chance the youtuber manga-minx

Great Story as usual

Just read this one. This is one of your great stories. Thank you for it.

Great Read

A great read. TTT does familial relationships better than anybody else. I just can't wait to see how he end the Two Moms. Two Laps series.

Nice Story

I agree with most comments about the knive and the stabbing. However the body and end were great. I just got through with TMTL, and did not like it. This story reinforces my belief in your story telling talents.

Wicked Good Story

Sorry, I am originally from Mass and was talking to an old friend and she kept saying things were wicked good and it all came back to me.

Dude, this is one stupid good story. I can see all of it happening without a single unbelievable word in the whole thing. Thanks for writing it and posting it for us to read. Wish you'd do more cause I am almost through all your stories.

Peace out man.
-=zg=-

A little blue pill...

brings smiles to everyone's lips--and perhaps a tear to their eyes.

Great tale! And great tail!

I actually didn't enjoy the story.... It was well written, but it was like watching a movie on tv and the power going out just as the plot is fully developed and the action was fixing to start. It left me wound up, frustrated and kinda pissed off:/
...and it was really, really long without going anywhere... I actually skimmed through a lot of the watching tv watching each other because it was so long and not going anywhere. ...and the feeling guilty crap because he mastrubated in front of his sister? I just dont get that... Hell I grew up in the bible belt, parents dragged us to church three times a week, etc. it wouldnt have bothered me at all, as long as we knew we werent going to get caught. ...and I sure as hell wouldnt have made some agreement not to do it again, lol. Yeah, you need to lead normal lives and not worry about it ruining your relationship, but usually that shit is just that, bullshit. I dont have a sister, but I do have cute cousins, and some of us did 'things' in our earlier years and we all get along just fine. Gotta have plot material though, lol.

raac

Although I am a btb fan. Raac with right remorse and consequences dealt out toward to the offender. Is appropriate at times like this one

Good story

Horrible. One star.

Kari was the best, but JPB killed her off. Barb would have been better than Audry who only cared about Audry. The 2 sequels found in Chain stories under Robs Saga were both far better than living with this whore. Occasionally there is a reason to try again, but this woman has no redeeming qualities. Maybe JPB should open up all his stories for someone to finish and improve.

Enjoyed very much

Very real. Felt like a true life experience.

Very nice

Hi,

I stumbled over your series and gave it a try.
Normaly I am more for girl/girl action and mostly don't read anything with male leads, since they so often are about the "Bang, wham, thank you mam" as F. put it *g*
So your stories really surprised me a lot!
Not only did you see to it, that your female protagonists had their fun (even if some of it was a bit fast, but heh) but also you were able to paint a very nice picture of the pokemon world. Gave everything a nice touch of reality and "if this was real, it could work this way".

I hope you had as much fun writing this, as I had reading it ^^

Beautiful

If there's something moral in the erotic- this is it :) Keep it up!!!

Angels and

What a cute idea. I read this on Sunday and grinned for n hour.

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