I thought the work, overall, was thought provoking, and well worth reading. I liked the way she ended with the question "Or is it?" suggesting our mother's perception is no longer valid in our world. I liked that notion, and I liked thinking that we may be part of the next wave, another chapter in romantical history. Some may complain that it is not 'erotic', yet even when making love there is space for more than just coitus. To my mind, it is writing like this which makes Literotica a more mature online library. Thanks for the work!
Makes you feel happy. Very happy.
Give us more... Your voice is so warm, calm and
sexy.... Really love to hear more...
Sounds so pure.
Sounds just like my first time. Your funny. I liked it.
You are beautiful... I love your work.
Red : well done !
Not a bad day in NP. Seeing red is not such a bad thing, although, (disclaimer), overdone. *****
With my usual, (disclaimer), comment about unbroken lines and a mild irritation that the speakers of my computer are connected to the flat screen.
listen I hear a woman telling her lover, master that she needs him and all that is her is his to take,penetrate.
Upon second listening I catch it, the iron willed tone that demands you will make time for me and here's why!
An audio mirror me thinks!
I'm listening to all your audios,then as me mood strikes I will begin your written works.
Glad you posted.
I'm not sure of the reason, reread the first three stanzas, and then jump to
Release the hounds!
Let those babies out,
Reveal their splendorous bounce.
wtf! in poetry less is more, all in all very interesting, but i fell a little more care in selection of what to include and what to exclude would go a long way.
Still at Macy's Viktoria?
I like it.
very mature well written passionate poem, very nice!
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