Yes, very nice. I'm a "triumph of the common man" sort of guy. I do enjoy work that, if not glorifying at least honoring the dignity of pressing on.
It's not so much Monday, just the fact that every day from Tuesday to Friday afternoon is also Monday.
Good work, loved the emotional exhaustion that seems to come through.
Falls over out of my chair.
Think, not thing. Just listen to it instead, OK? ;-)
I've been following the conversation on AH and followed your link here. It made me smile in that, "I've locked my keys in the car at the grocery store along with my phone on a hot summer day and I bought ice cream," kind of way we've all experienced.
Great poem. The reading was definitely "stimulating." I think the written version would benefit from some punctuation though.
Little Girl Lost filled my heart with many emotions; love, joy and happiness all maneuvered to come to the forefront.
Please, may I have another?
I meant " lilting"
To be set to a lilyin' beat than a poem :5-ed .
I didn't really like it when I was reading through it but the last line makes it all come together.
And you wrote this your way. Audio delivery was top class, too. In fact, a neat package all round. Now where's the box?
Haha reminds me of my girlfriend, damn some girls are nasty!
Wow, I didn't realize you were there when he had me for the first time! Great and funny expression of the first dive into sex.
I usually do not follow poetry, let alone non erotic poetry. But after your audio story a few weeks ago, I found myself wanting to her more of your voice. Your voice is a smooth and flowing as the words you write.
Did your way get all the treasure to their destination in one piece? I suspect so
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