There needs to be some resolution. Maybe there can be a little bit of talking while they're not having sex? Then they might be able to figure out just what the hell they are doing.
Chapter 2, please!
Oh my my, I had no problem with the author using "you" in this story. It made it that much easier to place myself in the story, about which I have no complaints. At all.
This doesn't gel, if this is the last chapter of their story - if she's thinking of a life with him, she would definitely want to know the circumstances that led to his committing assault.
Nah. Another heroine who runs when she should stand and fight for what she wants. What's with all these wimpy girls? She should have said "yes, I want to know because I care" - how hard would that have been?
Whatever dwells within the human heart that allows one to make a gift of one's love to another man is beyond me. Not beyond my ability to understand, but my beyond ability to imitate. It's always nice to see charitable love, if for no other reason than to reaffirm an appreciation of the fact that I share with no one. All I will ever need will always be mine alone.
But it's still a touching tale. Cheers.
Some people are certainly hard to please! For me this was very erotic, well written, exciting and I would love to read more. One of the best laid out stories I've seen for a while. You have captured the emotions so well, lust , guilt, shame.....so exciting. Well done!
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Great story!
I don't think your story is repetitive at all. I think this is an awesome story - very hot, steamy and sexy!
I agree with Robert
There needs to be some resolution. Maybe there can be a little bit of talking while they're not having sex? Then they might be able to figure out just what the hell they are doing.
Chapter 2, please!
"You" is fine with me...
Oh my my, I had no problem with the author using "you" in this story. It made it that much easier to place myself in the story, about which I have no complaints. At all.
it is nice that time
Think it would be nice to be able to love you , best part would be between your. Soft thighs kissing and licking you.
great story
I hope it continues.
Very bad.
OMG
This is great! Please do more, of when she goes to their house pleeease!!! xx
Wow! ....as if you had taken a stroll through my thoughts ...and then jotted them down. Left a little breathless ....
This doesn't gel, if this is the last chapter of their story - if she's thinking of a life with him, she would definitely want to know the circumstances that led to his committing assault.
Nah. Another heroine who runs when she should stand and fight for what she wants. What's with all these wimpy girls? She should have said "yes, I want to know because I care" - how hard would that have been?
I'm finally finishing this story. Life got in the way...
Liked this chapter best so far (this is the third story of yours I'm reading).
Thought provoking
Whatever dwells within the human heart that allows one to make a gift of one's love to another man is beyond me. Not beyond my ability to understand, but my beyond ability to imitate. It's always nice to see charitable love, if for no other reason than to reaffirm an appreciation of the fact that I share with no one. All I will ever need will always be mine alone.
But it's still a touching tale. Cheers.
Oka-a-a-y . . . chapter one and we know she's a slut. Let's see what comes next.
Hard to please!
Some people are certainly hard to please! For me this was very erotic, well written, exciting and I would love to read more. One of the best laid out stories I've seen for a while. You have captured the emotions so well, lust , guilt, shame.....so exciting. Well done!