Lets go swimming again she said.....
Thanks for a nice erotic story, any more memories, to share
BUT YOU LET IT GO DOWNHILL WITH STRINGS OF UNNECCESARY SEX DIATRIBES. YOU HAD A LOT OF GREAT POSSIBILITIES BUT CHOSE TO WRITE ABOUT SAME SCENERIOS OF MINDLESS SEX. YOU STARTED ONE DIRECTION AND WENT ANOTHER, YOU SEEMED LOST AND GRASPING AT STRAWS. LEARN FOCUS AND DISCIPLINE AND YOU WILL WRITE GOOD.
Made me hot.
Such beautiful wording and phrasing you have! I couldn't stop reading, and each sentence touched me deeply. It felt as if you had entered into my soul and saw what I crave more than anything. Absolutely glorious. I'll be coming back to this one again and again.
As a guy I love to grind. The illicitness is what makes it work; not May Dec or vis versa. Just being w/ someone who does it for you. You want to stroll down the Ben Franklin Parkway w/ someone like this.
Read both of your entries. You're a natural. RU sure you're straight ? Ummm !
Great story... Would
Love to read more...
Yes, damn it all! Loved it, hot wet sex that's believable. Characters and dialogue that can draw you in. There were a few technical glitches but so what! Keep it up.
I couldn't believe as I was reading Ch 1 & 2 how I was totally wrapped up into this story like a daughter would have her daddy wrapped around her little pinky.I totally love your writing style and stories. I couldn't stop reading until I had finished. Definetly my favorite and look mouthwatering forward to more stories like these.
A DNA test for a marriage?
With results that fast?
This must be Sci-Fi, but somewhat true to life - they still don't have flying cars.
I'm a real big tit fan too and I loved this sexy story. Thinking about giving this gorgeous big boobed girl a real cum soaking got me so hard that I just had to jack off. However, the thought of all that cum shooting made me want to see it close-up so I figured that, with a bit of imagination and agility, I could be the giver and receiver. I lay down on the sofa and propped a couple of pillows under my head before throwing my legs over my head so that my big erect cock was only a few inches from my face. From this position, I steadily jerked my cock until it started to leak its pre-cum. This turned me on even more and I started to urge myself on with some dirty talk. "You know you fucking want it, you dirty little cumslut" I told myself. "You're just gagging for that big fucking load of hot cum all over your fucking face." That sent me over the edge and I furiously jerked my spasming cock as it shot rope after rope of sperm all over my cheeks and lips. I continued cumming for what seemed like ages as my forehead, nose, eyes and hair all got their share of my massive cum explosion. Eventually my orgasm subsided as my first self-facial and biggest ever cum delivery came to a messy finale. I was absolutely drained but couldn't resist taking a look in the mirror to see the results. My cum drenched face was one of the horniest sights I had ever seen and I couldn't resist taking a quick photo with my cellphone to capture the moment for posterity. Unfortunately, my girlfriend found it and it took some explaining. I told her that it wasn't real and just a photoshop prank by one of my friends. She seemed to accept this but it didn't stop her from begging for a 'big load like the one in the photo' next time we were in bed together. Needles to say, I was happy to oblige!
Very realistic and enjoyable reading with the naughtiness, a little erotic flavor and woman's intuition with little innuendos. Screw the technical shit, this ain't for a newspaper, a magazine or a damn paperback book where anybody is making money. As a writer this author has skills, so an editor could clean it up, big deal. Let's congratulate and celebrate the positive of the work!! BRAVO!!
A fantasy all young guys would LOVE to have !! I LOVE your written offerings !
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