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that's the end of this long tell

and I thank those readers who have stuck with this tale (and there are one or two, if my reader stats are to be trusted). Hopefully I wrapped it up sorta kinda OK, but if I didn't, then hey - it's my story, so I did what I wanted!

I have grown quite fond of my leading ladies, but am not so sure about my narrator. I think he may not be reliable, and showed an inclination to steal women I have known over time, and turned them into actors in this tale that they were not in real life. Or were, as the case may be...

Anyhow, there it is. Done.


Next week. Promise.


Not so patiently waiting for the next chapter ;)

Please please please update sooooonnnnn!!!! I literally check for an update everyday like I'm some damn addict! Please just give me a hit & put me out my misery!

Invisible Juice

Loved the young cop getting it. Very well written. Only quibble - two "skinny bodies".

more please

When can we expect the newest chapter? I love your work and can't wait!

Even more grattitude

Thank you, Naoko, for taking the time to comment. Like you, I'm not so sure it would make sense to have her rescued by one of the men. Unlike you, I don't see her as a victim of Don Manley. She has plenty of volition in this. You just don't like the choices she makes, but that's a different sort of problem. I'm also not sure it's fair to say she needs Don Manley to experience pleasure. Really? Her sexual pleasure is established long before Don Manley enters any of the scenes. I'm not sure how I'll move this forward, but I'm pretty sure it will involve Joanie working something out for herself. She is in a hair raising spot right now, but I'm sure she'll come up with something. Stay tuned.


Rosa complained that she didn't get a shot, and Cέrμləa said not until the next book, does that mean the 200 book is closing soon and the 300 book is on its way?

Please write more !! I love this series


I'd like some more stories about amanda too. having raed thru all of your work, I kinda built this idea that the therapist and the mob bosss are in almost a shadow war with each other. Both use the succubi to manipulate chess pieces but ones trying to save the world and the others trying to take all he can from it. Whether or not this is qhere the overall arch is heading I'm now hooked. 5/5 can't wait for more.

Good story, it fell in line with the helplessness of fighting the deep ones. Id like to see more storys like this emerge.

Chilling. Justice served and well.

I would not like to be involved in a similar situation.

It's so good!

This caught me by surprise because it was so so GOOD! I love this demonic entity's personality and commentary throughout the chapter. Seriously, you need to keep on keeping on with this story!

Love this story

I need another update!!! I wonder if possessed Nicholas will follow her and protect her from Brandon.

Please continue the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter

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