I fucking love it. Love. Every single thing about it, I love.
Really great story. i guess this is your first In Erotic Horror and you have made it to the top of the chart.
Please write more buddy.
really hope she doesn't sleep fuck him the whole time. and while she is fucking all these men back to back, do they not taste each other's cum since you have them all bare backing her? Or is her pussy absorbent and auto cleans? lol
That's one seriously gory Ending.....
What I can't help but find ironic is seeing Cerulea poke fun at humans for always thinking they're the center of the universe...only to claim that very same position for Hell and its demons instead with a perfectly straight face herself, of course. Biased much, crazy young lady? :)
Seriously, I'm inclined to take this whole "and this is how the universe really works, silly human" spiel with a tablespoon of salt for the time being. After all, from an outside perspective, what do we have? One human ending up more convinced of something a demoness of all people told him after, surprise surprise, a second one had a chance to mess around with his brain for a while. Quoth the inquisitor: well, DUH! ;)
Of course, from a slightly more meta perspective it's also entirely plausible that Cerulea could simply be objectively right -- the Law of Conservation of Detail suggests that her explanation is either that or that discovering the gaps in it will be important later, otherwise this chapter wouldn't have dwelt on it so much in the first place. Be literally a hell of a universe if true, unless Hell itself turned out to be better than its reputation (and we haven't really seen much to suggest that in turn); still, it should stay entertaining enough for quite a while yet just what other sorts of trouble Phil can inadvertantly land himself in next. Besides, there's still that little mystery just what he and their relationship with him really mean to 'his' succubi...
This story will be ongoing. The story will actually continue for about 24 chapters. For a full round the clock naming scheme.
And with some very scary occupants! You seem to have a finely twisted mind and this story makes one hope you have the world story plotted out and planned. Your narrator is fiesty and interesting, if a little tactically innocent. I do like the fact she seems to learn from one episode to the next. I hope she finds the time for a real lover instead of being continually raped, but I ama romantic at heart. Please continue the story. 5 stars
Please update it soon I'm addicted!!!!!!!!
Rosa, will you marry me?
Very Rod Serling-esque. I actually skimmed over the sex because it seemed like a distraction from the existential crisis that Robert was experiencing.
All I can say is WOW! This story blew me away! More please - keep the story alive and growing.
Great story, I can't wait to read more. Love the story line, one of the best writers I've read here.. You are an incredible talent...
I only have two words for this story: FUCKING. BRUTAL. Jesus... D:
And then there was blood...
what else to say?
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