comments by Chagrined is often better than the story itself. The guy is funny, articulate, and very logical. It's always good to read his thoughts on any story.
At my age, I don't buy slow-growing trees either. But this got to me and i will go back and read from the start. Thanks (I think).
But as in an exaggerated comic book it is fine and entertaining. What I would complain about is that the gals are taking advantage of poor Steve when he should be resting.....
Get it right Johnnymax, he didn't say it was a shepherd's pie, he said his mother called it a shepherd's pie. World of difference.
Dad seems to want to separate his daughter from Zachary as quick as possible, but that may be just his manner of speaking and acting... English, you know?
with the western stories. I love them.
This story is truly delightful. And building in such an excellent manner. Thank you very much and I hope to read much more.
I have enjoyed reading this story, and am looking forward to the next chapters. I like your style woomanone. I think the details are quite good and believable. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Why do people have to tear down something that evidently many others like? This story is a romantic adventure novel and it keeps me spellbound.
This is the first time I comment on any story, but I could not be silent about this inappropriate shout.
Now that we know Steve's a keyboard player, too, it's become a full-on MoogPlayer parody. Well done.
I look forward to this story continuing.
It's a good yarn and it's a fun read and a feel good story.
I like the build up and the situations and all the women teasing Steve.
I think hospital scrubs with no bras would have been more intriguing.
It just occurred to me that Steve's hand must be in the sling palm up.
The cum shot was realistic.
Steve is a lucky guy.
When does Paula get her turn?
Keep up the good work HDK.
you are right I thought the horse was a work animal therefore shod to protect the hooves. No where in the story does the author indicate the difference so it could be a pleasure mount.
Endless comic book sizzle. No steak. Boring.
poor millie. i hope that she wins out in the end and izzy the bitch gets thrown into the gutter where she belongs.
An intriguing start. I'm very curious as to how it will progress and how she will respond to Dag's concealed cruelty. Moreover it's a pleasant change to be reading a story that is set in Britain rather than America (which the vast majority seem to be). I hope you will keep it up since I'm hooked!
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