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Cazzo ... Diavolo, come quick! ... Guardare at her ass! ... Up in the air!!
Diavolo ... Oh, shit! ... It needs a good spanking!
Cazzo ... Her pussy, I can see her pussy ... It needs a good fucking!
Diavolo ... Patience, my amico ... we need to 'mess about' with her first!
( to the fimmina ) ... spread your legs. ( she does )
Cazzo ... Dio mio! ... You have a hand full of her micio !
Diavolo ... A wet micio, Cazzo ... We have to lick it!
Cazzo ... You lick it! ... I just want to fuck it !
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Thanks for your comment ( verses ! ) re: my story Amoral Rogue That I Am !
take care, stay safe Levi Coldwater ( AKA Diavolia

WOW ... a fellow Mississippian ( I -- however-- moved on decades ago. )
... This a little 'hard' for my taste ... still, your talent as a writer is obvious! ... keep up the good work
... ... thanks to Melimelissa for steering me in your direction!
....................... take care, stay safe Levi Coldwater

Break me til I bend. Genius.

Very beautiful and sexy to read :D

Dark Kitten loves the feeling
Of an arse hook, inserted deep
Inside her tight back passage
Discomfort makes her weep.
And when her dainty nipples
Are clamped really tight and flat
Her cunt juice starts to well and flow
Her pain ensures that.
Her body's bound secure and tight
She can hardly move
Then her lover's cock, so thick, so hard
Starts to push into her groove.
Pain is pleasure; pleasure's pain
Dark Kitten knows this is true
So she suffers gladly, in silence
Till she cums and her ordeal is through.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Some interfering do-gooders
Think 'beurette' is a derogatory name
But Méli's Daddy isn't one of those
He'd never bring her shame

Méli loves it when her Daddy
Impales her on his prick
Her lovely tight love tunnel
Gets wet and hot and slick

And when Daddy's finished
And filled her cunt with cum
Méli loves to clean her Daddy
Tasting herself on his cock is such fun

So mind your bloody business
You interfering lot
Méli's Daddy's willing beurette
The name gets her so hot.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Dark desires will light such fires
That cannot be extinguished;
And when you come,
It is so fun
To make you feel you vanquished...

Racey, sexy, thrilling and daring.

It’s always the husbands job to look after his wife and clean her up after the other mans done. It’s his fault for not protecting her knowing that other men will discover the sweetness of her weakness.

Nice and hot and the same time. Theres something so hot about a woman that can’t say no. Just letting it happen knowing it’s the husbands job to clean up the mess.

Well done, Mark.
“My seed joins hers,”
My favorite part.
Five stars.

Nice seeing a cleaning with a lick of a limerick.

Love it. Five stars.

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