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DONT THEY HAVE DOORS AND CLOSETS

to "ide there luv away. TK U MLJ LV NV

A Quickie

Kids! Who'd 'ave 'em?! ;-)

Go Trix!

I remember this from the threads too
Another excellent piece
I loved the pace of this and the forcefulness comes across perfectly

WHY IS IT "TAKE"

when it is willingly given. TK U MLJ LV NV

I like your stories Ms Apple

But this poem does'nt work for me aesthetically : BDSM ically it will do .

THE CHEMICAL BOND

describing osmosis and capillary re-action. TK U MLJ LV NV

U have mentioned in your Bio

Fetishes as None but obviously U r a skilled submissive Foxe ! 5-ed.

Hey Erectus , welcome baaaack , Bro !!!

Sorry i missed your poem until dear Tod alerted me : please stick around for some time now before you disappear again . Am sure He Who must Not be Named is gonna be highly disturbed @ your reappearance !?
Amongst other news our Bro & mutual friend Harry Hill is gettin' married to a fellow Poet from this Forum itself !
Warm regards,
Ash

Welcome! A Poem with feeling.

Welcome! Your poem is a nice first "submission." It reads with a lot of feeling. Your poem's sub, shouldn't feel she/he is "losing your will to fight." She/he should give it to the Dom/Domme as a gift. Give it freely and reap from their acceptance of it.

Keep writing. Can't wait to read your next work.

all the best Todski!

still erect..., I mean erectus

Power play is my life's blood

I'm such a whore ..........
Total Power Exchange seems to be your raison de etre ........these words , lines .....whatever are very BD & SM :Faved 'n 5-ed !

Keep writing .

You are so forward with your writing , It is so stimulating , I have felt this way myself. tnbimale

HOT AND GRAPHIC

CONGRATULATIONS!
There is a sliver in my mind through which I see you when you close your bedroom door.
If I could, I would expand that line into a poem to complement your poem. Like so many of your exceptionally gifted erotic submissions this poem transcends into those mysterious realms where yearning and sexuality blend into the human experience.
FIVE STARS. THANKS FOR SHARING.

Todski, a shared feast indeed. Everyone bringing something to the table and feasting on the bounty before them.

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