Beautiful professional work!
is it " discreet " , Tess ? 5-ed .
Only my mind said "go away"
In the animated story telling
He flung the next man from his chair.
And made enough noise for two
Of the strange flings I've encountered
That one goes to the top of the list
And all others.
I like your sense of mimics and your rhythm and rhyme. Well done!
it's just beautiful. And the title works perfectly with the poem. Clever and understated approach that makes for powerful writing. I'm going to recommend it on the poetry forum and I hope it gets more reads. :-)
the Blue Films Industry !! 5-ed .
On the left hand Column is the Exhibitionist
a humble suggestion : your Poem would read more aptly The Exhibitionist & The Voyeur ! High 5-ed !!
this one is for you Lor ;))
Enjoyed your poem. Especially the last line as it raises so many fascinating questions in its imagery.
Crumbs were your sustenance? By choice? Was it enough?
To explore the entire spread with your tongue...
Submissive Kitty !!! 5-ed ...
In Dante's Inferno, Canto V. He refers to Lust, the second circle of hell. as a raging hurricane that tears at its occupants for eternity. and its most famous and lustful victim is Queen Cleopatra, who used sex to control Alexander The Great, and his Empire.
old-Dragon-Rider : thnx for sharin' ! 5-ed .
This was excellent and worth a fiver.
and the need to grow it and care for it and let go at the right time. And no wasted words, either. :-D.
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