to "ide there luv away. TK U MLJ LV NV
Kids! Who'd 'ave 'em?! ;-)
I remember this from the threads too
Another excellent piece
I loved the pace of this and the forcefulness comes across perfectly
when it is willingly given. TK U MLJ LV NV
But this poem does'nt work for me aesthetically : BDSM ically it will do .
describing osmosis and capillary re-action. TK U MLJ LV NV
Fetishes as None but obviously U r a skilled submissive Foxe ! 5-ed.
Sorry i missed your poem until dear Tod alerted me : please stick around for some time now before you disappear again . Am sure He Who must Not be Named is gonna be highly disturbed @ your reappearance !?
Amongst other news our Bro & mutual friend Harry Hill is gettin' married to a fellow Poet from this Forum itself !
Welcome! Your poem is a nice first "submission." It reads with a lot of feeling. Your poem's sub, shouldn't feel she/he is "losing your will to fight." She/he should give it to the Dom/Domme as a gift. Give it freely and reap from their acceptance of it.
Keep writing. Can't wait to read your next work.
still erect..., I mean erectus
Dream of long ago : terrific concept !
I'm such a whore ..........
Total Power Exchange seems to be your raison de etre ........these words , lines .....whatever are very BD & SM :Faved 'n 5-ed !
You are so forward with your writing , It is so stimulating , I have felt this way myself. tnbimale
There is a sliver in my mind through which I see you when you close your bedroom door.
If I could, I would expand that line into a poem to complement your poem. Like so many of your exceptionally gifted erotic submissions this poem transcends into those mysterious realms where yearning and sexuality blend into the human experience.
FIVE STARS. THANKS FOR SHARING.
Todski, a shared feast indeed. Everyone bringing something to the table and feasting on the bounty before them.
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