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Thanks

Thanks a heap for the Todd scenes. I still think Priya Ajmani needs to get it from Todd and his superstud mates.

Trust me - no one cares

This has dragged on so long that I'm not surprised no one is reading it. UGH!

To imahotgal

Some good Todd material for you, imahotgal. :-)

P.S. I may delay posting the solution for a day or two so that everyone can try to figure out who did it and why. And also because I actually need to finish writing it. :-)

More of the swimming?

Loved the swimming section - how about another one? As the previous commenter says, the second half seems out of place.

Excellent!

Quite an imaginative story, drawing generously from the inherent eroticism of the situation. A welcome departure from the stories that read like the description of a hockey game where everything is exaggerated. I shall monitor your future contributions, JHubby.

Cannot wait for more of this story.

At first I was worried that this was going nowhere fast, but I must agree with the others who have commented, and say well done to the author, please continue with this story os something similar.

part 2?

That was nice and hot. If that was just the beginning, pleae don't keep us in supense for too long!

this little flash is a fun read

I just wish we had more information the rest of the day.

Great idea but short on length

Would liked to have seen the story fleshed out a bit longer (pun intended). Could have added many more trysts and incidents to this plot idea.
The last statement seemed a bit confusing. "I better go find my husband"? Did you mean to imply Lori thought she'd been laid by someone else? Her chearcter hadn't been established well enough to tell if she was capable of makeing this joking inuendo.
You might think about revisiting this tale with more length. If your muse allows such.

Great story I am so wet now

Really amazing with superb grip on the story.

the best

This is the best fucking story I have read in 40 years. Brings out wishes and ideas most guys would have loved to have done. It has kept my cock leaking the whole time. I should would love to be Ron!!!

5-star goodness, with one minor thing.

I loved the story; the pacing, the teasing, the denouement.

One minor thing... "the shear force of" should be "the sheer force of"; the phrase "Shear force" has a different, and in context, possibly sinister meaning )

Eagerly awaiting more from you.

Loved your descriptions and the insight into Jewish culture. More, please. Either a continuation of this story or something totally new.

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