what a great concept and story teller. Keep it up. What about forced webcam exhibishism? No identities, just hungry masses looking on as teasing and wet denial of torso area leads to juicy outcome? Just keep writing!
The whole idea is awesome! Love the story, characters and so on, but a bit more bisexual fun on Dan's end would have been great! I am looking forward for more deliveries on this story for sure! Love it!
With Nina promising to keep her jeans on and zipper up, and promising the same for Nick's jeans and zipper, I think you have kind of boxed yourself in a corner as far as the next installment goes (if there is a next installment). I like stories where the wife teases her husband with her sexual playfulness, but I don't like the idea that the wife would have to break her promise in order for the playfulness to go further. And since Nick has already groped Nina's breasts, I don't think he (or the reader) will be satisfied with only more of the same.
Some young men I know leave swimsuits on a boat mooring, whenever they wear one? --I've encouraged total nudity however, with shaven genitals mandatory for all our submissive males. BTW; At 97 years old; I insist on masturbating our members daily, donating their [STD free] male ejaculate to childless couples, as often as required.Written contact is warmly welcomed by 'Mistress Barbara' BTW!
I wish you a speedy recovery.
I think that you underestimate yourself. I'am sure that you can come up with a number of new/revisited scenario's and am absolutely confident that none would be boring.
Yes I agree that your original intention is now redundant much to the benefit of your avid readers.
Here are some suggestions from my wife for further scenario's
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry and Lisa
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as a 'guest star' at a stag party.
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as a 'guest star' at a hen party.
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as the surprise performer at a 'Gentleman's Club'.
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as the unwilling/volunteer patient for a physical examination at a Medical School.
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as the unwilling/volunteer for a Sex-Education class.
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another great story
what a great concept and story teller. Keep it up. What about forced webcam exhibishism? No identities, just hungry masses looking on as teasing and wet denial of torso area leads to juicy outcome? Just keep writing!
Wonderful
Really enjoyed the first 3 chapters...more please :)
are you fing kidding
you know what will happen and you have no right to be mad about it when it does
you can't leave this hanging!!!
:-)
AWESOME WORK, BUT...
The whole idea is awesome! Love the story, characters and so on, but a bit more bisexual fun on Dan's end would have been great! I am looking forward for more deliveries on this story for sure! Love it!
Ha
The tease master at work again! Good going.
Just right
Oh for those days!
thanks
Thanks for the story...Hope there is a follow up.....
Boxed in a Corner?
With Nina promising to keep her jeans on and zipper up, and promising the same for Nick's jeans and zipper, I think you have kind of boxed yourself in a corner as far as the next installment goes (if there is a next installment). I like stories where the wife teases her husband with her sexual playfulness, but I don't like the idea that the wife would have to break her promise in order for the playfulness to go further. And since Nick has already groped Nina's breasts, I don't think he (or the reader) will be satisfied with only more of the same.
Good hot story
Nicely written, realistic, hot. More?
This rivals my previous favorite from you. Absolutely, fantastically written!
awesome
waiting for the next part.
Swimming naked is AOK with this reader too! As an elderly female 'CFNM' Mistress, I enjoy educating naked young men, in all respects of sexuality..
Some young men I know leave swimsuits on a boat mooring, whenever they wear one? --I've encouraged total nudity however, with shaven genitals mandatory for all our submissive males. BTW; At 97 years old; I insist on masturbating our members daily, donating their [STD free] male ejaculate to childless couples, as often as required.Written contact is warmly welcomed by 'Mistress Barbara' BTW!
Very amusing.
Two people having fun. Thanks for writing.
Speedy Recovery
I wish you a speedy recovery.
I think that you underestimate yourself. I'am sure that you can come up with a number of new/revisited scenario's and am absolutely confident that none would be boring.
Yes I agree that your original intention is now redundant much to the benefit of your avid readers.
Here are some suggestions from my wife for further scenario's
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry and Lisa
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as a 'guest star' at a stag party.
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as a 'guest star' at a hen party.
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as the surprise performer at a 'Gentleman's Club'.
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as the unwilling/volunteer patient for a physical examination at a Medical School.
Spanking/humiliation for Sherry as the unwilling/volunteer for a Sex-Education class.