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but wheres the sex details?

I agree its a well written story. But where are the details about the sex?
For instance, at the party there was more description about the bl8ndes dress than her body. No description of her dates cock or size etc. Its a very pg-13 story. Wheres the xrated parts?

Excellent Story

Thank you for sharing it!

wow!

I agree w/Richard NZ. How about a nice photo of your shaved pussy on your 'members' page? If you're a real 'show-off', then do so, and please your reading/viewing audience! It will make you feel appreciated, and it will please us also! After all, if you are a true exhibitionist, then let us see! Let us see! Please, let us see! By the way, 5*****so! Congrats for a truly sexy tale!
YOMEYO

Loved the end

I love a trick ending. This is a good short story. Keep writing.

Nice

I get so turned on by this. I would love to be a naked servant

Awesome!

This story got me rock hard!!

the story continues

check out part 2, via the author link

Oh

I have just finished the series, unable not to read every word and all I can say is 'oh' - but in the nicest possible way.

Your words bring back so many memories of my own, but that's not my point. I just want to say how powerful and assured your words are, as well as being so drenched in evocative emotion. It's great writing, pure and simple.

Thank you.

Georgie (Georgina)
xx

Encore

A brilliant continuation, can't wait for the next part !!!!

Interesting technique using second and first person, although I don't how I feel about your knowing the exact thoughts and feelings of the second person.

Well Done

I wrote after the last chapter. having just read the whole story up to that point because I didn't think some of the criticism made of your Characters were justified.
I see I anticipated what you had all ready written. Well I guess we were both in tune.
Gwen is enjoying the the new approach to life and Tim is now pleased with the reesults. I reckon they will now continue to enjoy and love their new approach to life for a long time. Gwen will still inevitable have her mother's indoctrination restraining her from going outside her boundaries unless Tim convinces her it is OK. I think that it is just the right place to finish. An excellent story, beautifully told, WELL DONE!.
Oh just one correction the shirt she wore for the Photo shot was not a "Nelson" one, remember she didn't think it right because if anyone else saw the pictures she didn't want the company identified!. The lady is always there !!
After thought, move on 15 years and let them become like the olderly couple on the other boat, carefree and comfortable together. enjoying watching their daughters' bringing up the grandchildren with a good sense of values but less self-conciousness.

outstanding

An outstanding story with an interesting plot twist. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Webcamming?

You should try webcamming - couples are very popular!

Lets be fair.

This is a great story butit has made Gwen te central Character. Tim does hold back as much as she does if not more. He is a great Guy, but when ever she asks him something. He rapidly rationalises wondering what answer will please Gwen. He could try to accept her curiousity for what it is.
After all the years he has gone along with her uptight up bringing and while welcoming her more relax new personae and the way she is enjoying sex with him. He is still hesitant about answering her questions about what he likes or does.
You can't say Nat is a cheat because we don't know so much about her relationship with Adam. But from all accounts it is pretty good and the fact that she enjoys a old girl friends company seems to be with his knowledge and acceptance. But please don't make Gwen a cheat.
I hope the photo Album gets Tim to really have an open chat with Gwen. So she knows what his boundaries are. They are not spring chickems after all. they can be more relaxed in their enjoyment of each others sexuality and love for each other. keep up the good work. I wonder why the more interesting bits have a lot of typos! Do you get excite when you write them?.

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