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excellent

look forward to more. the pacing is perfect.

j.

Good Stuff!

Wow... my naughty married mind was eagerly devouring every word as the images flickered in my mind . . . back of the class . . . exposing games . . . great piece of work! Thanks.

PROOF READ!!!!!

Example - " I admired how tighter her body was as she applied lotion to her legs."
'tighter'? Absolutely does not fit the sentence!! 'tight' perhaps, 'tighter' definitely not.
Several other silly errors that a simple reading of what you had ACTUALLY written, as opposed to what you intended to write, should have eliminated!

great start

Great start to a true teasing series. Please continue with all the characters - more fun to cum lol

Interestingly addicted to 'CFNM' ordered public milkings of all remaining viable ejaculate, effectively castrated & made anally available to this writer for filming purposes.

A five star, most worthy erotic contribution from an 'ANZUS NFNM' group of hairless male submissive sperm volunteers, willing to be fisted or fucked on film.

Please check and recheck your writing

Your use of names needs continuity, "Robert" is either Robert, or he's not.

Early initiation.

SoleBrotherJeff:

Yes, I was the same. I used to spend more time watching female students' under-the-desk shoe-play than I spent learning lessons. It was just so exciting to watch!

And these days, with the sort of easy-to-slip-off footwear – especially flats! – that girls and women wear, we see the wonderful possibilities all around us, all the time. And yes: on many occasions it will be the plain-looking girls and women who will excite us the most.

We certainly are sole brothers, Jeff: You haven't grown out of the love. And neither will I.

Dave.

Well written story and I'm looking forward to more!

I love the story concept of women required to be essentially naked in an office setting. The transition from clothed workers to required nudity was too harsh for me to enjoy reading, but I'd really like another chapter (or three :-)) describing Angela becoming comfortable and even enjoying the new dress code. And perhaps a chapter where she and two or three more of the office women are required to come along to a conference or trade show or other public event with some male colleagues wearing their "work attire" throughout the trip as walking advertisements.

You are my sole brother

Every word you wrote, I have thought!!

I have had a foot fetish from a very early age.

At school I didn't want to sit next to the pretty girl & try to impress her. [I was very shy]

I wanted to sit to her left or right one seat behind her so I could observe every movement of her legs & feet & she couldn't see me watching her.

I soon learned that the pretty girl might have ugly feet while a rather plain classmate could have very sexy feet & enjoy shoe play under desk.

It was a wonder I graduated with the average grades I did with all the daily distractions from seeing what went on with my various female classmates under their desks!!!

I am now a senior citizen & I still crave to see some female feet in my daily routine, including the supermarket!!!

SoleBrotherJeff

Not as good as previous ones. Make them longer, more similar to the other ones please.

One of the best stories of all time

You did it. You captured the formality and stiffness of the English in a most amusing way with the "Fun and Fornication" of the noble class. Your character development was beyond excellent. A solid 5 stars for an elegant presentation. My only suggestion is a better proof-read prior to publication. The mention of a Mrs. Blackwood was a break in an otherwise brilliant and exceptional story. A jolly good read Sir. Few stories are as funny as this one.

Redeemed

I was a bit disappointed with the other two stories today (I start at the bottom when checking Literotica) and thought you may have been overdoing it. However you returned to form with this one.

Editing....

Please,take a few minutes or even better, have someone else take a few minutes and check your story. More than once the names were wrong and it just appears sloppy when that happens. Also, check tenses... Story idea is good. Lots of possibilities just tighten up the construction though.

Fun story. Well done.

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