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Yes, I'm afraid too, just like Cannd (03/05/15)

It seems Tom wants to bake his cake and eat it - poor Blake, this is soo frustrating! The problem is he's in love with Tom, and either he pulls out and moves on, or he's going to suffer hell ... Lucas may be a genious, but where relationships and love are concerned, he's just a beginner. Not at all like Tom, who's used to getting what he wants.
Oooh man ! It's really difficult to read this page by page - it is given to us in homeopathic dosage !! Drop by drop ...
I'm dying here ! When can we have the conclusion, please, pretty please ...
Thanx for your hard work !

Just do it.

This can be a one time thing unless you like and want more. If not she got to see it and will be happy. Go for it.

thank YOU for your beautiful work! you are adorable!

I write as well, I do enjoy reading (of course) and thanks to your story I am waiting and waiting for the new chapters. I became addicted to it.
You writting is remarkable, I love the way David feels and thinks, he is just adorable, is so smart, and his heart is clean and pure. Daniel is extraordinary in so many ways, well I just love them. Thank you so much for the part when Amy got what she deserved since so long. Damn I really hate the evil girl. And thank you so, so much for using (at least!!) the L word. I'm so glad you are promising upload more chapters! and yes, please be a Writer, I wish you the best in your writer's career, I will buy your books for sure.

with love and respect, from Chile (sorry the bad english).

This is a beautiful story.

Anonymous (02/25/15) - I didn't like your comment !! You sound bigoted. prejudiced and small-minded !!

What a fucked-up way to refer to anyone ... Homos ??? You do realize you read an erotic story under the "Gay Male" category, right ? WTF ???!! Listen, are you always this stupid or were you just making a special effort on February 25th ??

Perihelion, I loved the second installment of your story. I was a bit disappointed that Tom had to go running off to meet his girfriend, (which has nothing to do with your fantastic writing skills), right after they made love, but ... I'll just have to see what will happen on Ch. 3 !

What the flying fuck

This story is seriously one of the best I have ever read. Both in paperback or online. Its amazing. Your way of story telling is seriously seriously seriously a gift from the heavens. I have had umpteen times where I had to walk away from my table and just calm my nerves because the story is so good and intense. Great job man seriously.

No

Your mind may find gay porn arousing because of empathy and mirror neurons, but that's very different from enjoying the physical reality of actually living it yourself. Do it if it turns you on, but not to please Dana. I'm a straight/slightly bi woman, and although I find gay male porn hot, I wouldn't at all be turned on by pressuring my boyfriend into it. This sounds more like a control thing on her part than pure lust, unless she can sense that you're actually into the idea and just need her to push you there.

REALISTIC rules!

I applaud your style! and can't wait for the next chapter! Let them read Fairy Tales!

Thank You from the Author

Hello, everyone. I just wanted to take a moment to say thank you for all of your beautiful comments and congratulations. They have really touched me deeply. This is a new world for me, writing. I wrote the first chapter on a whim, curious to see if there was anyone out there who might respond to what I have in my head. It means the world to find that my words found a home. It has inspired me to continue and research and focus this into a craft. I'm taking my time finishing this series and working on launching a career as a writer in this genre.

I want to make sure that I stay true to the characters I've created here (and in case you didn't know, they are based on me, David, and my experiences in HS, semi-autobiographical, names changed to protect identities. In all its about 65% reality and the rest filled in with my hopes and dreams) So I will be wrapping up this series in a way that is true to life. Some of you have picked up on the foreshadowing tone of writing in the first person past tense. But I want you to know that no matter how this series itself wraps up, it is not a sad ending with shattered hearts and devastation all around. That, I can promise. I hope you will all understand when I choose the plot direction that most closely mirrors my past. I think it will do justice to my story, both in real life and the one I've created here.

That said, there is a possible spin-off I'm thinking about. But I won't delve into that before I finish this series. The next chapter has been re worked into two. So parts 11 and 12 will be released sometime next week. Then there are three or possibly four more after that.

Thank you all so much for your support and please email me anytime. I'm trying to respond as I can, but life sometimes gets in the way.

Love to you all,

D.A, Mackey

still crying

Have been following this story bt couldn't help crying while reading this chapter. Tanx a lot for this masterpiece. D boys have come a long way. They are so in love with each other and I hope they get the happiness that they deserve. Tanx once more for dz DA

don't knock it til u try it!

One time won't hurt you. And it will make your "other half" very happy. Just make sure she knows this is a one-time thing and doesn't expect more in the future. If u think she will, then i would think long and hard (lol) on it before sucking on anything.

LOVE your writing

but had to stop reading after chapter 5 touched something I'm apparently not ready to deal with..... I love reading all the comments though. Keep up the good work

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