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Damn homos. Should blast you freaks into space so you can wipe out aliens with your aids

Spelling?

Does "despite" translate to "desperate"?

Out of this world ! Bunnies ? Spies ? Kidnappers? Naaah ! 3 sex-maniacs, is all ...

A beautiful, funny, sweet and utterly charming story with some unbelievable characters that leave you enthralled and also aroused at some point - Dane being the cause of this for me. This big guy has a tender side to him that belies his size and powder keg personality.
With the bunny I find myself having mixed feelings - he's sweet and sexy, but I also kept waiting for him to start running with a watch in his hand saying "I'm late" - (I never did like "Alice in Wonderland", even as a child ...); as for Jason, I think he was totally clueless; honestly "an errand of questionable legality" - really? And later, the fact that bunny was kidnapped ... everything around Jason felt surreal !
Well, it was fun while it lasted. Of course I will be re-reading your stories; but you haven't given us anything new since 2008, and for me this was your last story in Literotica. I made you a favourite author because really, you've given me a lot of pleasure with your writings. I wish you well, and lots of success in your work. Be well.

You sound too experienced at this.

Your FIRST introduction to gay sex and the guy's coming on to you....
"Oh...stroke it, baby,"
Then the guy settles down for your FIRST rim job......
I screamed, "Eat me, daddy, eat me!!"
Then he lays you out for your FIRST anal fuck.
"......Treat me like you would a sweet young girl......"
"I want to look into your eyes as you reach my deepest places."
They're not the kind of words I'd use in those circumstances - they're too much in the way of 'experienced' chatter.
The theme's good enough, if a bit hackneyed but sound as if you are indeed NEW to these experiences.
Don't give up though - your future chapters will be better, I'm sure.

yasssss

Yay cant wait no more 😄😃😀😊☺

Wow...just wow
As with each of your series, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Still lovin' it

I agree about the installments being too short, but each one brings new twists and insights. Five stars.

Oh dear...

The typos are too much. Not to mention there isn't a single highway near Swansea, lived there most of my life and don't know a single one. Motorways, maybe, no highways.

"Grasping my whatsits" why be cryptically vague when in the next paragraph you're going to use a name like horny Joe?

Take a breath and work through your ideas slowly to get the details right. That way you might avoid the typos too.

WHY.....................

why are there so many critics of ur writing . I loved the story because that's how many of us started out ................ I hope you still are having our great brand of sex

same thing................

isn't it amazing how most first times are alike and how many men love it from then on .I know I did ...........

Simply wonderful !!

OMG ! I loooved this story - so much magic, so much love - beautiful, seductive and utterly spellbinding.
Too sexy for words.

I absolutely WILL re-read this story (like all your other writings), because I'm just completely bewitched by it - fascinated ! I nearly expected too hear the genie of the lamp ! Please give us more joyful magic !! :)))

No, no, no, no, NO !!!

It can't end this way !! The poor guy was raped and the perp has fled !!
What are u gonna do about it ?? Will you let the poor librarian have nightmares or will the guy come back to ... apologize ???

Sequel plllllzzzzz !!!

WOW!

I feel like I have an addiction to your wonderful stories...is there a rehab available??? Marvelous beginning...without question!

Exhilarating

I have been enamored since the first word, on the first page, in the first chapter.

It's hard to believe that all if this has taken place in less than two weeks. It feels as if months, years have transpired with all of the action, twists and turns that are taking place in this story.

Even though verbal words of love have not been expressed it's clear that Stephen and Lynk care for each other in the actions of what's not spoken. "That tightening in his chest..." I mean how could he not know what that means?!

It has been fascinating to see Lynk evolving, growing stronger in his power and having Stephen, equally strong in temperament following, unquestioning and faithful. They are a perfect foil for each other.

Love the feistiness of Lady Wiuni. I hope she rewards Stephen handsomely for his heroics and hope the 3rd child is not a "gimp" in Leader's master plan.

Thank you for the early Christmas present with this latest addition.

THIS WAS GOOD TO READ

This was really your first?? I loved it. i am gonna read your other stuff as well. Thanks for sharing these two with us. I tend to love stories with one guy being big , dominant and treat his man as tender and loving as Paul treated Derik.

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