I really liked this story. My favorite ones follow the same train of thought. I wish for at least one more chapter with a final confrontation with Jeremy but overall I really loved this story... :)
I love Mitch and Darrin, and am so glad to see you're carrying their story forward beyond "Wrangler Butts"! Look forward to reading about new adventures as their relationship continues to develop.
That you used the concept of two souls or two spirits. I heard that term myself quite a long time ago and have always liked it. Other than that I love the story! I love wrangler butts and from what I see this is going to be a great sequel!
i frickin' thought miles dead i had almodt cried your so fucking awesome their are no words too describe your artistic work keep writing your just do gucking awesome gosh i sound like a nerd that just got their first calculator.
I get turned on by the innocence and the sense of wonder of a young man having his first gay experience, where he is hesitant or maybe even reluctant but goes into it finally of his own free will and finds that he loves it. I now wish I could have experienced this in my youth too.
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Can I have sone more...?
I really liked this story. My favorite ones follow the same train of thought. I wish for at least one more chapter with a final confrontation with Jeremy but overall I really loved this story... :)
Loving! Please tell me there is gonna be more?
Thank you for continuing the story!
I love Mitch and Darrin, and am so glad to see you're carrying their story forward beyond "Wrangler Butts"! Look forward to reading about new adventures as their relationship continues to develop.
One thing, though... "baby batter"? Really?
FANTASTIC READ
THIS IS ONE STORY THAT EVERY READER MUCH READ THROUGH TO THE END.... FUCKING FANTASTIC........
well 5 stars
i think there should be a 10 star vote for stories of this caliba......this is one of a kind... fantastic story and read.....
The plot's not bad but the story could definitely stand to be fleshed out a bit. What you need most is an editor.
simply the fucking best story ive ever read full stop...
breathtaking brilliant
Please continue
You write so well please tell us what happens next. I am so worried about Blaine.
What happened to Stroke Rate?
Love the stories about Connor and Alex but am also a big fan of stroke rate which really got my pulse rate going. Where has it gone????
I liked
That you used the concept of two souls or two spirits. I heard that term myself quite a long time ago and have always liked it. Other than that I love the story! I love wrangler butts and from what I see this is going to be a great sequel!
Oh My God
i frickin' thought miles dead i had almodt cried your so fucking awesome their are no words too describe your artistic work keep writing your just do gucking awesome gosh i sound like a nerd that just got their first calculator.
Just the kind of story I like
I get turned on by the innocence and the sense of wonder of a young man having his first gay experience, where he is hesitant or maybe even reluctant but goes into it finally of his own free will and finds that he loves it. I now wish I could have experienced this in my youth too.
sweet cum
pretty much my fantasy only id like some in my ass too
sorry to much sex in it.? its taking over the story.?
Witty and sexy
This deserves higher scores than it's getting.