I like this story and where I think its gonna go but I think the development of Sean and Laila is a little too far into the story. I don't really see their part coming together, only bits, but I know its coming!! :)
It was a good story but the female came on a little.....strong it was almost scary , nothing prepared you for her...attitude, she also spoke like she belonged to some kind of cult. At one point i thought the guy was scared and tried to be as pleasing with his answers to her out of fear. The story had promise. If you like.this type of.story and can handle real issues put out there, i'd advise reading/ buying "The Naughty Sins of a Saint" by Laveen, TianaTiana (kindle) one of the best books i ever read worth the money.
Great update! Sean absents for all those years placed him in the category of an enigma. Love getting the background on him clears up the mystic. Looking forward to the updates.
I love it, to be able to live for black sex daily would be so wonderful
only I have too much family responsibility and can not have any more children
really not what any children to interfere with the hot black sex but a really great story turns me on so much just like real black cock does
Thanks to all the readers and supporters. This is my first story in years, and I wanted to make it short and sweet. It is too good to be true; I also agree, but I plan to make my future stories more in depth and closer to real life. Thanks again to everyone who favorited and rated :)
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jummie
I thought it was fucking HOT!
funniest part
I laughed my ass off when Jackie flicked Nicole and Gabrielle and then was like "Yall aint slick" Funniest part EVER!
Hmm
I like this story and where I think its gonna go but I think the development of Sean and Laila is a little too far into the story. I don't really see their part coming together, only bits, but I know its coming!! :)
nice story
my bad comment 4/17/13 however damn it felt too good to remove my baby arm from your wife please take care of our seed
I like this 5 stars
But it was too short can't wait for the next update
had potential....but i don know...
It was a good story but the female came on a little.....strong it was almost scary , nothing prepared you for her...attitude, she also spoke like she belonged to some kind of cult. At one point i thought the guy was scared and tried to be as pleasing with his answers to her out of fear. The story had promise. If you like.this type of.story and can handle real issues put out there, i'd advise reading/ buying "The Naughty Sins of a Saint" by Laveen, TianaTiana (kindle) one of the best books i ever read worth the money.
sweet
Sweet story, but what a risk having never met the person, scary.
OOOOGGGHHHH!!!
That was the sound of one more tiny dicked whiteboi creaming in his panties!!
Very good
I think it was very sensual and erotic.
I really enjoyed it.
AWESOME
This series can definitely be made into a movie. Excellent chapter and I cannot wait for the next installment. Clearly its more than 5 stars.
Great update! Sean absents for all those years placed him in the category of an enigma. Love getting the background on him clears up the mystic. Looking forward to the updates.
WONDERFUL
Like a real life dream, that would be so great to have a black master like that
to please daily yummmmme
HOT
ilove ur stories so real life and sexy , loving black cock has made my world so happy
HOT
I love it, to be able to live for black sex daily would be so wonderful
only I have too much family responsibility and can not have any more children
really not what any children to interfere with the hot black sex but a really great story turns me on so much just like real black cock does
To All The Readers
Thanks to all the readers and supporters. This is my first story in years, and I wanted to make it short and sweet. It is too good to be true; I also agree, but I plan to make my future stories more in depth and closer to real life. Thanks again to everyone who favorited and rated :)