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PART 2

PART 2 PLEASE!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS AMAZING AND SO SEXY ;)

Great

Exceptional story. Great build. Very hot and emotional. I was hooked.

Hot

I only wish we got more of them doin' the deed.

nice

Story could of gone longer

58??

I was wondering how old millie was, having never experienced an orgasm or masturbation, but 58?? I was expecting an 80 year old.

A beautiful story

This is a beautiful story. It transends its roots as a piece of erotica to become a deep and moving story of love and humanity.

great

i loved the story

I'm in Love

I am in love with this story. It reminds me of two walruses on animal planet battling for dominance and control of the harem, in this case the recruitment department. For now, the reign is still held by the "old guard." Can't wait to see what happens next.

good but nothing to see it was a lesbian love scene

Heartbreakingly good

One of the most interesting stories I've read on Lit. Amazing and moving.

I agree

I did read your commentary at the beginning , so I did expect some straight sex. That being said, I feel that the extended scene of the disgusting dual gang bang was a little over the top. I did respect the judge requiring the condoms and am surprised that the artist would let them all cum into her.
I am curious though to see where you take this story, so I will be keeping an eye out for the next chapters.

Oh my god I love this story!

Good story

Have you seen her again if so please tell us about it

5 STARS

Your writing is excellent! Way, way up with the top writers. It is always amazing to me how excellent writers can put so much emotion in what seems to be so few words. I look forward to more!

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