This story reminds me a little of the Sisterhood stories. Makes for a good romantic flash story. Five stars in my opinion.
Just to offset the wimps/skanks.
Brits with funny accents.
Good comments and I enjoyed the read very much. I love your stories, particularly from the woman's point of view. Men just can't or have a hard time replicating that. I have my own stories that explain my background. I will sign off as Sergeant Dom.
Lit is getting ruined by sick cuckolds shite, the kids I feel sorry 4,don't have kids if u want 2 act depraved or wait till there gone but if I had a mother like her and a wimp dad guess wat they never see me again is conider sick fuks dead
your story you are retarded and toymargaret lied someone as stupid as she wouldn't know how to use a phone.
I just hope it doesn't devolve into the basic cuckold crap I despise. Let the guy, imaginary though he is, have a least some pride left when its over with.
Fucked around on him and then fucked him one last time with that self serving letter. And of course like a typical the celt wuss he fell for it.
the story just petered out. Seemed pointless by the time it ended.
She feels there is something lacking in their marriage, and instead of talking to her husband she cheats, then won't forgive HIM for not forgiving HER?!
And they always say "I never meant to hurt you." WTF did she think would happen?
Would she have accepted such a self-serving statement from HIM in similar circumstances?
Stephanie is still a bitch. Mare says she will choose Joe over everyone else, family or friends....except for the wedding...and the parties....and the visits...and
Maybe she believes it, but it is contradictory to the reader.
Good read, though I am not a BTB I still think the wife got of lightly. I hope Mary is going to indulge in a 3sum with the couple. Husband gets her pregnant and she moves in the house !
and some thoughts on other postings.
One of the things I liked that there were no ex-seals/rangers/whatevers to wreak physical havoc on anyone. The family was not rolling in money and had everyday financial constraints. Makes a story much believable.
To those who wanted more vengance on Carl, I think he became irrelevant and keeping him in the story would have lessened it. I already feel he was in longer than needed.
For those looking for a reconciliation between Karen and John - given the storyline and characters, I believe there could well have been a reconciliation after a number of years apart. John even metioned that at one point in the story. An alternate ending where they are together for the scene in the school is quite plausible. IMHO.
I look forward to reading more
One of the VERY few stories I've given a 5 star rating.
At the end, the author wrote that John doesn't talk, think or behave like him. But I can relate to John. I could see myself behaving very similarly to how John did.
My only quibble with the story was the amount of time it took before Karen ended things with Carl. That delay was inconsisten with her character and the overall plot of the story. Or so I think.
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