It was good until the introduction of Mel. Testing him was underhanded and makes her no more trustworthy than if he had taken Mel up on her offer. If you look at other stories where people are tested like that, it does not end well.
I worked at a hospital for many years and back in the old days it wouldn't be too uncommon to hear about a couple of staff getting caught doing the dirty deed. Depending on their status it might be overlooked or not and one or both parties would be gone. The Doc did have a lot to lose but it was a good story with a happy ending, well done.
We love a story with a happy ending. We are sure that there would be far fewer divorces and separations if more couples experimented in the lifestyle like this.
I've given this one four stars, because while it's good as a stroker story, it's missing the characterization that made me add you to my "follow" list. You don't get any real feel for who these people are when they're not in bed (or wherever they have decided to do it) together, and while what there is of the story is technically good, and quite competent, that's all there is to it.
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If only I had a cock that flop from thigh to thigh like that. No clothes no problem
It was good until the introduction of Mel. Testing him was underhanded and makes her no more trustworthy than if he had taken Mel up on her offer. If you look at other stories where people are tested like that, it does not end well.
I worked at a hospital for many years and back in the old days it wouldn't be too uncommon to hear about a couple of staff getting caught doing the dirty deed. Depending on their status it might be overlooked or not and one or both parties would be gone. The Doc did have a lot to lose but it was a good story with a happy ending, well done.
While some of your fans seem disappointed the Cossacks are being too polite, I found it charming, savory, and ‘not too pervy’.
Good story great ending
I enjoyed reading this story. Thanks for writing it.
Clever and well done, as always. People who nit-pick about tiny details on stories that they're reading for free are a little annoying at times.
This needs a lot of work on the word use.
Beautiful! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
We love a story with a happy ending. We are sure that there would be far fewer divorces and separations if more couples experimented in the lifestyle like this.
Definitely a stroker read,
I've given this one four stars, because while it's good as a stroker story, it's missing the characterization that made me add you to my "follow" list. You don't get any real feel for who these people are when they're not in bed (or wherever they have decided to do it) together, and while what there is of the story is technically good, and quite competent, that's all there is to it.
I wish there was more to the story, but what's written is great
Sounds pretty normal. Sometimes boring is a good thing.
Good first story!
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