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A gentleman and a forgiving woman

This might be porn but I can't help feeling it's very real.
We could learn a lot from these two characters, about how love and sex should be.

Nothing better

than an illicit fuck in the pantry.

wonderful

well written with a nice surprise sending. Sometimes the best part of a story is that which is not told :)

Orgasmic

Mandy is so lucky to have Mr Johnson filling her hot cunt with his seed. There are many of us in real life who fuck our well-endowed fathers-in-law!

assisted living

Assisted living situation it's a good plot your story is ( hope it is true ) but it is way too long and one gets a bit bored while reading it...our best part are the last part telling of your sexual experiences with her should have gone in to more detail ... I would have described each sexual situation and took more time in detail!



Giovani

1 star

part 2 should be erotic horror, and Jason shoulda died a horrible death for the monster he turn into

Very Sexy Story

Thanks for a very erotic story. The flow and pacing of the story were well done. I liked the way that you built up to the climax. You left me wanting more, which is certainly preferable to the alternative.

Referring to the previous comment on proof reading, yes, there were a few places that could have been improved. But I can only say that I'm put off when the only thing Anonymous has to say to a story that is this well done is "proof read your story."

very hot and can we get some anal

Can you make it a GILF instead?

I'd like to see him help out a lonely 70 Something GILF who hasn't had cock in 4 decades.

It really was a wonderful story

Well-written, new territory explored. I've read your other stories, also, and enjoyed them very much.

Understood

In chapter three I will use Wally's confidence to seduce a new MILF. Thanks for the suggestion.

proof read

Do a better job of proof reading as there are several places where the words are out of sequence or not logical. Such as this "came to rest of her" which would be better as "came to rest on her" then or reversing words in a sentence makes reading hard.

Fuck them all

since aunt caught him with the old lady next door. I want his mom to catch him with his aunt/her sister. Then his mom will want him next.

Well written, one little mistake

Great story, loved it.
After the plane crash, it should read the families of the dead gathered, as there were no survivors.
Well written, looking forward to more.

FVERY EXCITEING

WANNA READ ABOUT HIS AUNT SEDUCEING HIM AN HIM FUCKING WHILE HIS MOM COMES HOME CATHING THEM AN WANTS HIM TO AUNT BREAKS DOWN HER MORALITY

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