The progress of the story felt very rushed.
My wife-to-be wrote me a letter like this when we were in college during Finals Week and I didn't do very well. I'm not doing well right now either! This is the hottest letter I've read since 1982 so thanks and write more more more.
so full of love and tenderness and teaches us to look beyond the surface of our lives...loved it
A very enjoyable read. Well written and good plot development. As with all stories that I enjoy reading, they are made more enjoyable if there's an element that reflects a part - large or small - of my own thoughts on something.
" I'll take a "mature" woman in her 40s or 50s any day over someone who is younger " says it all, no matter whether or not the relationship involves physical intimacy.
which I loath and detest...should be shamed and thrown in to the gutter where they belong....
Whatever this means, I couldn't do it. And I'm a little tired of being told about females who can "swallow" all of anything or anyone. This isn't--I don't think--a "political" thing, it's just that I can't even swallow huge vitamins or fish oil gel things--
TURN IT AROUND: HOW MUCH AND HOW BIG CAN YOU SWALLOW? (What kind of people would try to make choking an erotic act? And females have smaller throats than males have. And here I thought men loved women--)
Well, I have made it through all of the series and I must say, this is one of the best written stories on Lit. Character development is excellent and the plot with all of its twists - wow! Although some of the twists have been predictable, the story has been great. The underlying love story between Danny and Bridget shows the author's true writing talent. Thanks so much for the well written story.
The last few chapters have started to get a little old. As much as I have enjoyed the story, I am hoping it ends soon. I am afraid of how the story might end. I hope my premonition about it is wrong. However, it seems obvious to me what Julia is going to do. If I am right, I don't want to read the end.
Wow, Ashley's kind of a spiteful little bitch, willing to destroy a marriage over not getting a car. And what's *his* excuse anyway? There's this whole plot here where other people all have emotions, and while his lover is a bitch, his wife has some sense of guilt over what happened, and her parents show some emotional content as well, he does absolutely nothing except check off his bucket list. Does this guy have absolutely no respect for his wife? It seems like he doesn't feel anything for his marriage; he's cheating on her yet feels neither guilt nor pleasure at sneaking around and hurting the woman he married.
Give him some depth, because as it is, he just seems like an uncaring asshole.
I feel a little like Stevie. Dazed and Confused. Our author kind of leavs "stuff hanging". Needs resolution, like the young man.
Only complaint, you failed to taste the sweetness of a young pussy. Cardinal sin, my friend
Can't wait for the next part, great writing
What about those hot, soft, BIG TITS? I be fuckin you, your Tits gunna get Kissed, Sucked, Squeezed, Slapped, & played with!! Wanna fuck them Tits! Push them BigTits against my balls, rub em all over my face.
I ain't into fucking your ass, but that Pussy, & them Tits gunna git a workout!!! I got a couple fingers & a BIG BLACK VIB, to jam your ass Baby!
You better PUMP that ass up to meet my slammin cock. Thats the way I like it, come on Cunt, FUCK ME!!
OHH the story?? Well it was prurdy good, cept you left out them Big Tits of yours. I wanna complete FUCK, not just your cunt, mouth, hands, ass. Gimmy them BigTits. I like Little Tits too.
Great story cannot wait for the next part !!!!!!!!
tri bdtrieed N
nd ovouaoy dILWS--
he wouldn' t hurt me--
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