Love it! Can't wait for more!
Let it not be over!
Great story, please keep it coming. I love the story line. Hopefully the next part is real soon.
Oh my... This is fabulous. More please! I hope she disobeys and gets punished next time...
Another story for secret faggots.
A bit short. Would have liked more. I've come to expect long chapters from you. But altogether really good. Can't wait for more to come out!!!
I had almost given up hope of you continuing. Thanks for updating the story!
Marshas characterr is soooo hilarious ohmygosh I was laughing hysterically at her witt. Thanks for another great chapter!!
Totally read this in Tom's voice (and had Tom in mind). It was really well written and really hot. My only complaint is that it took so long to get to the sex, the build up could have been shortened a bit. It was worth it though.
I hope you write more (Loki or other)
Will Jason be threatened for a 2nd time by the contract he signed with Andy?
Really? And she still is interested? Sounds like your only sexual experience is with prostitutes.
"devoured her dirtiest slut hole," is pretty good.
This list really applies to the whole series, not just this part:
rapped = wrapped
towed = toed
TIVE IT TO ME = GIVE
aloud = allowed
rapped = wrapped
threw = through
write = right
where = wear
In these instances you have used the incorrect word. It is really distracting to have '&' in place of 'and'. It would be very easy to do a simple search and replace to replace & with 'and' before publishing and make things easier on your readers for almost no effort.
Good story and thank you for the great deal of effort you have obviously put into it.
You ask some great questions and pose interesting possibilities. I try not to dwell too long on a specific encounter Brandy has, so that the stories can be read as a series, or on their own. I consider the Naughty Neighborhood series the next chapters. The plan being that she would eventually go back for her sophmore year at school and face the dean, her boyfriend, her roommate, etc.
Right now I am working on the next chapter for Brandy, which is taking far too long. But it continues her time at home during her summer break.
Thanks so much for your comments.
There is a lot of plunging going on in this story! Tempting fate in a scenario MAY briefly make it more exciting, dangerous and satisfying, but is it worth the risk to carry things to (or over) the edge?!?
...leftover not continued.
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