Are you kidding me? " She's not young but can still get pregant", she's 35 not 65, stop writing like its surprising that she's not saggy and wrinkly.
Seriously when Azalia is stalking Florence in the ballroom he doesn't even have his gun out yet. Also when she is holding Tamius down by her throat and giving her little monologue why didn't Ben and Florence just shoot her then? No wonder they get captured about every 3 chapters or so .Otherwise mostly a great story
Love to see further adventures of this family, maybe the poor dad is forced to do German Scat porn, the women discover the joys of fisting, and of course they seduce and destroy more girls from the neighborhood.
That was perty much all about really good sex and I loved it....bill
Gosh!!! I was reading this fantastic chapter with my mouth open, totally enthralled and caught up with the scenes.......
Sitting with my knickers all soaked and cooling my heated face with a fan.....you are that good.......5 stars no less!!
I need chapter 18 please!!!
Are these machines real? If so I need to invest in one of these
i hope this story continues i want to know if she get pregnant by him
Just wow. More plz. I don't codone rape but interested in the mystery man...
I love how you've explored Mila's character in terms of her beliefs and thoughts while at the same time exploring her desire to shrink away from and deny whatever she feels towards Asher. Plus the dynamic between their connected minds. Truly a work of genius.
I've just recently had the pleasure of discovering this incredible tale and I must say I love love love this amazingly, erotically beautiful story.
But I just have to say what really gets me is the deliciously amusing creativity of the curse phrases. I mean "For the love of the Emperor's sweet sweating ball sack..."
Pure genius. Thank you so much. Its been a long time since I read a story which captured my attention so fully.
This first chapter has drawn me in. Oddly enough, I find myself drawn to the little details in the story...the slight accent to his voice...the little bit of grey in his hair...the knife! lol who the hell goes around with a knife in his suit indeed! Engaging start! I enjoy the natural flow of your writing. keep it up!
I love all the strong, fierce, feisty women in this story - both the good and the baddies! I'm definitely an Arlington fan for sex appeal, and he's such an intriguing character, but a lot of "redemption" would be necessary for him to be a serious romantic prospect for Kara. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Just anther shit brindle story. Hated it. Very sorry I read this piece of crap. I fired a cunt because she thought I should have given here special treatment. I had security remove. Her from the plant. When her husband called pissed. Off because I. Fired the slut I told him in graphic detail why she was terminated. He left her.
god, i knew i should have waited till more were posted before reading this one, i was just so excited when it came out..... im dying of anticipation waiting for 30!!
When the series ends please, please, please publish into a book! This beats 50 Shades any day!!! On the other hand, don't ever end the series. Keep 'um coming!!!
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