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Can't wait for more

Really enjoyed this story and I can't wait for more chapters!

AN INDIAN MARRIAGE CH . 06

Liked the story all through but the male domination was not appreciated. It is different to pursuade the bride and convince her to fall into the groove gradually than putting some punitive actions and compel the wife to obey under coersion which is not in good taste.
OVERALL THE STORY HAS BEEN GOOD AND IT IS HOPED SOME GOOD SEQUENCES WILL FOLLOW AND THE BRIDE IS BROUGHT INTO A MORE EQUITABLE SITUATION THAN BEING MADE SUBMISSIVE BY COERSION AND THERE BY MAKE THE BOND ENJOYABLE FOR THE BRIDE AS WELL.

Hey

Just love it.
At least she got away safely...for the moment.
Lucky girl though.

Great story

Love the characters and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!

Nice!

Great story, but will Lexi ever love her work? I eagerly await the next chapter!!!

Yeah this was pretty cheesy

One more day?

In reply to your comment anon (and whoever else is wondering when the next chapter is happening) - I posted chapter 2 on Friday so it's obviously taking the full weekend to pend. Keep your eyes out for it tomorrow :)

more of u

The hunted series aren't half so bad I liked them but they can be way more erotic. I think it was less erotic on the literary part and the story gave more stage to the current situation than the background which could provide a better sense of link and arousal. The hunted title kinda loses its meaning somewhere in the middle. Would like some more of u

ROSES ARE RED MY NEIGHBOR

just like the color of your buttocks. TK U MLJ LV NV

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Enjoying this!

you have incredible insight in the human character......good job!

Best story on Literotica!

This story is amazing, please write more!!

One of your best ones yet Ashon, keep it up.

Next chapter

Are you going to finish this?

Oh please!

Stop posting. Nobody cares or is interested in any continuation of this drivel.

Put this crap in Gay Male

Where it belongs. The go find an interesting or original story line. Then learn how to write an entertaining story. Look at the low scores and look at the incredibly low number of people that read it. That should tell you all you need to know about how bad this was.

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