Emotional, intensely moving
I appreciate all your comments. Silly, snarky, kick in the ass or over my head, doesn't matter, they always make me think.
Best gift ever.
if it was interest-free credit, I'd buy one, big one, but I'm afraid they'd repossess my ass from my pyramid.
Sorry I'm in crit lite mode, due to a why the fuck do I put up with assholes mood
Not you trix. The responder to your comment.
what can I add, that these two boys haven't already said?
Two trips outdoors to Mt Katahdin under contrastin' circumstances & relationship statii :5-ed .
Tragic, though, full of real emotion. Well done....
Unforgiving, and drenched in emotion. Suggestion....revisit this, and write something else that outlines how you survived this, and are in fact...moving on.
Clear and detailed pictures that I enjoy very much, Jaycee
This is a beautiful sentiment, beautifully expressed. More,cried the Oldbear, I need more!
Just Excellent. Stopped me in my jaded tracks.
Emotional pain goes right to the core. You captured it. Makes me want to hold and protect.
Glad that I did. Love the poem in this AND the original form. The best line for me is "I reach for you but feel the space."
Words and form just right
And might even help them get the dozen.
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