I read your great Spring Break series a couple years ago, and really enjoyed it. I’m not sure if I wrote to you at that time, but I’m glad to see you’re still producing good reading material.
I don’t find many great stories on Literotica – they must be well written and if not true, they should be believable. Yours are among the few.
Today I thought I’d give McKayla’s Miracle a try, but noticed Remembering the Fallen, and read it first. You have a special insight that I appreciate.
Wonderful story, and so appropriate today as I make preparations for Saturday’s parade.
I totally agree with you. I myself prefer the long slow drawn out seduction. After all, actually doing the deed is pure mechanics - insert part A into slot B repeatedly until embedded and done. It is the getting there that is the fun part, and I always prefer the stories that extend the journey rather than hasten to the destination.
It is another unfortunate aspect of the inherent nature of these stories that one can predict the outcome before one starts. After all, on an erotica site, what else can one expect except that the protagonists will end up in bed at some point. Most will also live happily ever after too, so it seems like picking up a book knowing how it will finish, and one just hopes that the drive to the ending winds a long tortuous road with potholes and bumps and speed breakers. There is a large number of authors on this site who achieve just that, which is great for people like me. As you say, there are the other sort too, offering short stroke pieces, which appeal to a lot of people too.
I will now have a read of your offerings and see if you help me to travel hopefully, or just to arrive.
I am 100% Natural RedHead Irish Female With A Sexy Lil Pus (says My Hubby). I have a medium Sized clit that has Great extreem pleasure When Arroused and penetrated by my Mans fingers, tongue & Gr8 Cock! I Cum Really Quickly With Just Touch of my Loved One. I get Multiblies and back to back Squirts Every Time! But Ive only been this Way since I Married My husband. I Was Never able to Climax before except With The Touch of my self or the BathTub! So My pleasure Mostly has to do with My Man Thick 8in Cock and I Think my clit size his Sum effects to! So in a Nutshell my Medium Size Clit nd My Mans gr8 Makes Unbelievable Magic that is Undescribable VERBALLY JUST WITH GREAT FEELING!
I have been a fan of yours for years. I want someone who believes as you do, to tell me how we can get the guns from criminals if we the law abiding citizens become unarmed. I was raised with firearms and have never had a thought about using them for anything but hunting, skeet shooting, target practice and defending myself and family. A perfect example of criminals ruling the cities is Chicago and Oakland. Another of the great cities is Stockton, CA. Truthfully all of the "me first and entitlement generation" has broken down the society that I was raised in. I am glad that I am at an age in life where I won't be around to see the end of our great nation. The liberal agendas have taken so much from people of all races by entitlements to the point they don't have to do anything if they don't want to. Game the system is the mantra of today.
Strange questions, but as I read this, there was a thought....
'oohhhh how I'd love to be that mirror'
Yes if I die, I want to come back as your mirror.. But knowing my luck I'll be stuck on the wall of a teenager popping zits! Eww .
Love the description of yourself as someone else in the mirror, which changes to you at the end..
And the exploration of your body... And the way you tease with the picture you paint of you sat there, looking at each bit you describe... You really are good. Really good xxxx
If you were born and raised in the U.S., then you ARE a racist. Doesn't matter what race, what age, or what gender you may be, you're going to be making decisions based on data that is influenced by your race. You're going to be influenced by cultural values learned early and reinforced often. You're always going to be viewing your world thru that filter. This doesn't mean you have to 'act' racist, but even defining what is or is not a racist action will tend to vary depending on your race. Back when I was a younger fella (circa the Bronze Age), I worked in a fast food restaurant. One day, a couple (of race A) complained that the young lady (of race B) serving them was treating them in a racist manner. Specifically, she was obviously trying to avoid even touching them (when counting change or handing them their order). She claimed the hand cleanser we were supposed to use was oily and she was only trying not to spread it to the customers. Racist behavior? Maybe, but on who's part?
See a shrink. Because if you're reading rules on how to go potty, you are either a very sick person or 2 years old. Of course, since the author is "defiantly bi" maybe she needs to brush up on the rules in case she needs to use either the men's room or the women's room. I'm sure different rules apply.
I remember the mist in the morning rising up from the lowlands, the heat and the smile of a friend. The gulp of water warmed too long by the heat, tasting different. A thousand memories that came back , good and bad.
THANKS FOR REMEMBERING
I am 24 year old guy and a virgin.Never had a girlfriend. Don't get me wrong I am not gay. I like girls, but don't have the nerve to talk to them into a relationship. I don't like taking advantage or make promises which I am not interested to fulfil. Its kinda weird though that I like reading personal stories of people in literotica rather than the sex stories which I am suppose to. Can't help what I like. There are thousands of people with even weirder hobbies and passion. Sex is just a grain in the sand. Neverthless just like you, I too do hope I could really feel special for someone and get easy about being with a girl. So all is can say is "All the best to both of us"
I am a 24 year old guy, this article makes me feel proud of my virginity (ofcourse from lack of opportunity). Before, I thought guys who have casual sex must be the luckiest guys in the planet. After reading this I understand that they are not lucky but lost souls. I pray they all find happiness/love in their life.
Yeah but is there an unforgivable act or actions?
At what point do you, as a Moderate, say that there is no POINT in forgiveness?
When the vase gets broke at what point do you say 'It's as good as new' again?
My trouble is I can still see the broken vase as having been broken at least ONCE.
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Wonderful story
Hello, HLD,
I read your great Spring Break series a couple years ago, and really enjoyed it. I’m not sure if I wrote to you at that time, but I’m glad to see you’re still producing good reading material.
I don’t find many great stories on Literotica – they must be well written and if not true, they should be believable. Yours are among the few.
Today I thought I’d give McKayla’s Miracle a try, but noticed Remembering the Fallen, and read it first. You have a special insight that I appreciate.
Wonderful story, and so appropriate today as I make preparations for Saturday’s parade.
g
Nail on the head
I totally agree with you. I myself prefer the long slow drawn out seduction. After all, actually doing the deed is pure mechanics - insert part A into slot B repeatedly until embedded and done. It is the getting there that is the fun part, and I always prefer the stories that extend the journey rather than hasten to the destination.
It is another unfortunate aspect of the inherent nature of these stories that one can predict the outcome before one starts. After all, on an erotica site, what else can one expect except that the protagonists will end up in bed at some point. Most will also live happily ever after too, so it seems like picking up a book knowing how it will finish, and one just hopes that the drive to the ending winds a long tortuous road with potholes and bumps and speed breakers. There is a large number of authors on this site who achieve just that, which is great for people like me. As you say, there are the other sort too, offering short stroke pieces, which appeal to a lot of people too.
I will now have a read of your offerings and see if you help me to travel hopefully, or just to arrive.
The previous poster
is not Irish. Ireland has a great education system. Nobody who went through it could be so illiterate.
Natural RedHead Easily Arroused W/ My Gr8!
I am 100% Natural RedHead Irish Female With A Sexy Lil Pus (says My Hubby). I have a medium Sized clit that has Great extreem pleasure When Arroused and penetrated by my Mans fingers, tongue & Gr8 Cock! I Cum Really Quickly With Just Touch of my Loved One. I get Multiblies and back to back Squirts Every Time! But Ive only been this Way since I Married My husband. I Was Never able to Climax before except With The Touch of my self or the BathTub! So My pleasure Mostly has to do with My Man Thick 8in Cock and I Think my clit size his Sum effects to! So in a Nutshell my Medium Size Clit nd My Mans gr8 Makes Unbelievable Magic that is Undescribable VERBALLY JUST WITH GREAT FEELING!
Sorry, Wrong.
I have been a fan of yours for years. I want someone who believes as you do, to tell me how we can get the guns from criminals if we the law abiding citizens become unarmed. I was raised with firearms and have never had a thought about using them for anything but hunting, skeet shooting, target practice and defending myself and family. A perfect example of criminals ruling the cities is Chicago and Oakland. Another of the great cities is Stockton, CA. Truthfully all of the "me first and entitlement generation" has broken down the society that I was raised in. I am glad that I am at an age in life where I won't be around to see the end of our great nation. The liberal agendas have taken so much from people of all races by entitlements to the point they don't have to do anything if they don't want to. Game the system is the mantra of today.
Reincarnation?
Do we believe in it? Is it possible?
Strange questions, but as I read this, there was a thought....
'oohhhh how I'd love to be that mirror'
Yes if I die, I want to come back as your mirror.. But knowing my luck I'll be stuck on the wall of a teenager popping zits! Eww .
Love the description of yourself as someone else in the mirror, which changes to you at the end..
And the exploration of your body... And the way you tease with the picture you paint of you sat there, looking at each bit you describe... You really are good. Really good xxxx
mechanics of desire
I can't find the first movie they mentioned mechanics of desire. does anyone know where i can find it. thanks
well done
Very well laid out. It explains things in a logical and easy way for beginners to understand.
I must respectfully disagree.
If you were born and raised in the U.S., then you ARE a racist. Doesn't matter what race, what age, or what gender you may be, you're going to be making decisions based on data that is influenced by your race. You're going to be influenced by cultural values learned early and reinforced often. You're always going to be viewing your world thru that filter. This doesn't mean you have to 'act' racist, but even defining what is or is not a racist action will tend to vary depending on your race. Back when I was a younger fella (circa the Bronze Age), I worked in a fast food restaurant. One day, a couple (of race A) complained that the young lady (of race B) serving them was treating them in a racist manner. Specifically, she was obviously trying to avoid even touching them (when counting change or handing them their order). She claimed the hand cleanser we were supposed to use was oily and she was only trying not to spread it to the customers. Racist behavior? Maybe, but on who's part?
And if you have problems with the bathroom?
See a shrink. Because if you're reading rules on how to go potty, you are either a very sick person or 2 years old. Of course, since the author is "defiantly bi" maybe she needs to brush up on the rules in case she needs to use either the men's room or the women's room. I'm sure different rules apply.
thank you
I remember the mist in the morning rising up from the lowlands, the heat and the smile of a friend. The gulp of water warmed too long by the heat, tasting different. A thousand memories that came back , good and bad.
THANKS FOR REMEMBERING
I just have to say it...
"Quivering quim... feels good in the mouth."
Yeah it does. ;)
I am 24 year old guy and a virgin.Never had a girlfriend. Don't get me wrong I am not gay. I like girls, but don't have the nerve to talk to them into a relationship. I don't like taking advantage or make promises which I am not interested to fulfil. Its kinda weird though that I like reading personal stories of people in literotica rather than the sex stories which I am suppose to. Can't help what I like. There are thousands of people with even weirder hobbies and passion. Sex is just a grain in the sand. Neverthless just like you, I too do hope I could really feel special for someone and get easy about being with a girl. So all is can say is "All the best to both of us"
I wish every guy would read this Essay
I am a 24 year old guy, this article makes me feel proud of my virginity (ofcourse from lack of opportunity). Before, I thought guys who have casual sex must be the luckiest guys in the planet. After reading this I understand that they are not lucky but lost souls. I pray they all find happiness/love in their life.
A response to your response.
Yeah but is there an unforgivable act or actions?
At what point do you, as a Moderate, say that there is no POINT in forgiveness?
When the vase gets broke at what point do you say 'It's as good as new' again?
My trouble is I can still see the broken vase as having been broken at least ONCE.