Sci-Fi & Fantasy Feedback Portal

Load newRequesting new commentsRequesting new commentsNo new comments, try later

Latest 15 Reader Comments

Excellent lore. Bring it on

WOW! What a great story line. Very well written. Will be reading more of your work soon.

Welcome back! I'm glad you are taking care of yourself. Obviously another 5*... I love your campy stories.

Glad your dad's okay and things are loose better elsewhere in your life mate.

Seriously who calls an author greedy because they didn't write for awhile? Fuck those guys. Best wishes for you and yours going forward.

@DeniedLoserWatching - thanks. The story is about rather more than appears on the surface. 😊 Emily

The story is good, but the people in it are stupid. Jennifer started something monumentally idiotic and then the rest just keep going in that direction.
I sincerely hope that someone will wise up, and that Kasey will make it home.

Lit hasn't grouped this one in the rest for some reason, so it's listed out of order.

Yeah, this was one of my favourite chapters. It was great fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting!

Alright, assault on the evil fortress. And that queen bitch is just going crazy for Tom.

I’m glad you got the story moving again.

Nice, could do with more material.
A nice start all the same

Again a great chapter with the Runesmith. Thank yo for your wirk and sharing it. I am glad that you manage the fate of your life well. I just can say, been in similar situations and wish you all the best and that you solve everything in a good way.
Sorry for my bad english I am not a native speaker.

As I will always say: Family, & One's Self, come before anything else!
I can't say I wasn't disappointed that there wasn't any more chapters over the last couple months. But, I also Hoped You, & Yours, Were doing OK. As I knew the next Chapter will come, when You are willing, & able!
I Hope, Your Father stays healthy for years to come, & that You, & Your Wife, Can work things Out, & be closer to each other.

Thank you for reading all the way through, and for all the comments too. :-)

Ohh, we have some competition for Tom? Interesting.

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel