Good Start

But yeah this definitely needs more chapters...

more please!

I am quite enthralled by your story, and the tribulations of the main characters. Please update soon!

wow

I'm a huge sci-fi fantasy freak... and i LOVE this!!!!!!! Thank you.

Very cool, but...

the author made one major error. As the story goes, when Isis was collecting Osiris' body parts, she found all of them, except one. His penis. Since he lost the ability to procreate, be became the lord of the underworld. In the art of the day, you'll notice that the color of his flesh is that of a corpse.
Consider a re-write, using these elements. Perhaps, Isis uses her powers to create some kind of magical phallus, even better than the original, lol.
Good luck!

I said. It a fewchapters back ill say it again I'm so glad I don't have to deal with cliff hangers

Great read!!!

I have enjoyed reading both chapters you have written so far. I hope you come out with the third soon!

Chapter six uploaded

May 18 at 2:15 in the morning. Not my fault if Lit takes a week to post it like last time. Anyway, hope you like this chapter because...well I won't spoil it for you (grinning). Please vote and comment. I really appreaciate constructive criticsm and or praise.

And the Price?

Nice chapter, well written again. Wonder what he'll have to pay ...

I find it amazing in the middle of seriousness I laugh lik whn she yelled maybe I'm a lesbian or when even said I didn't like vomiting.

OMG.

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It's just one of those stories on here that just really make you feel something amazing. ahhhhh!
Damn, just, DAMN.

Artful

Love is its own special kind of magic.

Good guess

That actually does make sense, but it wasn't why Nall registered all the other quarkware readings on her way to Earth - I wrote that first chapter of Imnir Ark well before I'd thought up Humanity 2.0. The short version is that I wanted to leave room for other stories in the same universe, or at least at the time I did.

There's another story I wrote - the very first one I put together - called Pixie Queen Caitlin, which had a lot more detail on quarkware than either of these stories... maybe at some point I'll put it up for free too, it's currently a (very poorly selling) professional title under one of my other names.

Thakkor

Love the story but disappointed in the male character. Alicia seems like such an independent woman. Having a knight in shining armor doesn't suit that independence. The knight should have been more tarnished and shadowed. I wish they had more of an opposites attract relationship instead of this docile boy next door feel.

@ OneIBlind

Is that a reference to Oliver Twist? =D

Ch 11 is up on the blog: pleasuretrove.blogspot.com

(or you can find the link in my profile)

It takes awhile to get approved here on Literotica.

Reply and praise

redlion75 ~ I believe it explained that her father was holding it in Stewardship for her till she was 21, as well as her own explanation of preferring war craft to statecraft.

Excellent story. Whether you write more on this or not, I can see how the two would compliment each other. The wise and loved king wanting to protect his people, and his might warrior queen, whose armies have conquered many worlds.