More please

Please write more about these two gay tvs please

Holy Crap

I loved it. This story is so delicious. Please write a part two! She definitely needs to get that cock in his ass next time :)

My Kind Of Woman

it took me some time but I found out a woman like this is what turns me on. Wish I had one in my life. It would be so much happier.

yes, i concur, great story and ppremise, but spelling, punctuation and rhythm are bad...slow down, and take your time...writing is, and should be a pleasure to do.!!

Nicely Done

Well written and nicely done. It has pace, plot, color, tone and ambiance.

Big Black Cock

Great, Great, Great!!!!!

Good first story

Your story was extremely hot, I had to admit I was turned off at the beginning thinking this was going to be a tranny/female story but the three tranny roommates was an extremely hot twist. I enjoyed the sex scenes a lot but the ending was a bit too abrupt...I think you should have left it open at the very least for future chapters.

More, keep going with the story

Poor guy

Lol I am going to continue reading future chapters in hope that this guy will get even eventually. How he goes about his revenge would be very interesting to see.

twists and turns

The author has made a stated desire to end the story and pursue other story ideas but the fans here at literotica urged the author to continue the story with the assumption that the banquet would reveal if Martin is to be determined to continue to resist or succumbs to the forced feminization and is "broken" into accepting his new position in life as a feminized man bride/wife.

Although I agree the time between chapters are rather lengthy, part of the allure of this story is the novel concept of arranged marriages still existing in a modern society and the new acceptance in society of same sex marriages.

The author should continue to be allowed to develop the story and the characters therein. The eroticism doesn't have to be on overt display in every chapter.

As a fan of this story, I still hope for an escape for Martin, and hope he finds the courage and opportunity to tell Constance of his circumstances. She may very well be his only ally in ending his situation.

Good Job RIK, keep up the great writing!!

Thanks

Only two comments but it seems like it's an enjoyed story by a few people on here. So I will probably continue it. Look for a sequel near the end of this week or sometime next week.

FANTASTIC!

I felt drawn into this story. I wanted to be the one shown her transexual side. I envy their ability to be their selves the rest of their lives. I want to see more on their progression. I hope these characters begin hormones and share their long transition on hormones with us. I want to learn and cum from their breast and other developements.

Boring.......

Just more anti male rubbish.

chapter 4!

this may become the best series in this genre. cant wait for chapter 4!!

Great Story, Jessie has Potential

Overall, a great story. It just seems like Jessie is a little too passive later on in the story. At first, she is the initiator, asking Craig out. Maybe she should have been the one to penetrate him first. She seems to be a strong woman, and she protected Craig in high school, so she could have carried Craig up the stairs and held him as they fell asleep. I still like the loving, egalitarian aspect of the relationship, I just wish Jessie was a bit more assertive, like the "women" in your other stories.