Thoroughly enjoyed the story, can't wait for the next part.
I love how you unlike many of the other writers on here take the feelings of the main character into the story as it makes it so much more realistic. i feel i can identify with ophelia as a character which as a writer should be one of the story's aims. yes a couple mistakes like the sibling/only child bit but please continue as you are.
Why do so many stories start out good, and then the author brings in a scummy ass, low life ni**er? Like it's a good thing. Makes me want puke!
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Beautiful story can we have a follow up please they make a really lovely couple.
Sissy, you have been so shy and so reclusive all your life. You are about to cede your anal virginity. Unwillingly, at that. Never mind what others say about you. They too had theirs ripped out long ago. Now it's your turn to describe your innermost fears.
There are countless women out here eager to hear YOUR version of YOUR first time.
Beautifully written story. Wow Hermaphrodites have best of both the worlds. Got to read your other collection now
Damn, i know it's corny to want them together, but what a bitch, acting like she was going to be joining in, and not telling Jay about her new "friend" i mean Jay told her about Christy, Claudia, Kandra..... Fuckin weak and shows lack of respect for Jay.
I loved this series and the whole maybe/maybe not get the girl, but i'm gutted, and would be pretty pissed at Lisa for along time, never hate, but very disapointed not to even get a goodbye, just a dear john... Damn i hope Ch 13 is good.
This really really needs a second chapter right now! I so want to find out what happens next and if there's going to be any more sex changes or any impregnation.
Story sent up was great. The ending definitely needs a part 2 (and maybe 3 and 4). Would love to read how Sam/Halyn introduces Pernice to the club and the positive reactions of friends,
Wow! I always wanted to be a girl for a real man. Put me in a tight dress and stiletto high heels and use me like the slut that I really want to be. Take me in my mouth and ass ans cum in both.
I come here to read good stories to jack off to
Not to read jackoff stories that rehash the same old shit.
If you can't be any more creative than this, why bother?
A fantastic read. The above comment from so long ago shows some do not understand we are dealing with erotic Fiction, and like all fiction writing, has the freedom to go to where ever the author so chooses.
i love the series please write a new chapter please
I mean it, it's rare to find a story that A) Has an actual plot, B) doesn't rush but also doesn't drag things out and C would be finishes on the -nearly- perfect note.
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