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Good story with the foundation of a great one

It was too libido centered. Yet the action was undeniably hot. The author centered the story in bedroom and let promising subplots go fallow. There's no doubt that Momstheboss can nimbly write a scorching boudoir scene, but he could rank among top authors of this genre if he developed other aspects of his characters' lives

More please

Great story...but we need more:)

apremodonna ??

I think the poster was meaning a Prima donna or by it's definition .. a person that's considered vain, temperamental and/or conceited.

Very good story so far.

I like the story so far maybe since the sister said she was going to let mother know maybe mother will want in on the action just a thought I mean incest is incest no matter how you look at it.

Here's An Ending

Jim meets a woman in his new location. falls in love and lives happily ever after. Betty, now only being asked out by men thinking she is an easy fuck, relents and becomes a whore for cash. She catches something and lives unhappily ever after.

Just one possibility

TOO BAD

THAT THIS WOULDN'T HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE. GOOD GUYS MORE OFTEN GET THE SHAFT AND GET FUCKED OVER. BUT WHY DO YOU HAVE THEM BAD MOUTH THEIR SPOUSE THEN SAY THEY DIDN'T. JUST LET THEM CHEAT AND FORGET THE BADMOUTHING IT DOESN'T FLY.

HATER"S ARE EVERYWHERE!!!

Please continue your stories, there are many great people in this world that other people have put down or talked bad about, but they over came and became GREAT!!! which I think you are capable of becoming. I also think you have more fans than asshole's. And to all the people who have negative things to say, GET A LIFE!! seriously. No one gets paid to publish on this site. I for one have enjoyed everyone of your stories and have even purchased your work to show support as I have done with other author's on this site. IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT DON'T READ IT!!! simple. But please hun don't stop writing. Peace and Blessings !!! F2P

LOVED IT

I wasn't really into the dominant-submissive relationship at first, but as i progressed through the story i really enjoyed it.

and for the first time, i manage to finish reading a 9 pages story. Normally i only like the short ones.

Well done Timmy

Omg yes

But how can I rest when your moaning sends me over the edge again?
-N

Amazing !!

So glad you decided to continue this !!! Five stars ! Please continue ASAP

Awesome

Cael can be proud, he is realy Hungarian , his ancestors blood is still running in his veins .

Ooohh Amazing

One of the best stories I've ever read. Will be sharing this with my wife and fully expect her to explode.

Thank you for taking the time to write and share this. Fantastic.

Now lets see what else you've written :).

good read!

I really like the story, very hot! But I think using the hunger games books as a base ruined it a bit. First because of the description of the characters, second because of their response. I got to thinking about how they didn't sound like Peeta and Gale, and it was distracting… Though I enjoyed your description of them ;) All in all, good read, keep writing! Just consider writing from scratch...

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