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poor Anonymous

Anonymous, you don't make sense.

Nice one

Well written. and a good imitation of the old detective stories.
I enjoyed it well.
HP

Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book"

This and a few other pieces were written in the tone of Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book", which uses Listing Style recounting snippets of personal experiences during a dark period of history. Most people will never encounter Listing Style for personal narratives.

Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book"

This and a few other pieces were written in the tone of Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book", which uses Listing Style recounting snippets of personal experiences during a dark period of history. Most people will never encounter Listing Style for personal narratives.

Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book"

This and a few other pieces were written in the tone of Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book", which uses Listing Style recounting snippets of personal experiences during a dark period of history. Most people will never encounter Listing Style for personal narratives.

Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book"

This and a few other pieces were written in the tone of Sei Shonagon's "Pillow Book", which uses Listing Style recounting snippets of personal experiences during a dark period of history. Most people will never encounter Listing Style for personal narratives.

Your names

You mix up Mike and Trent too.

annoony the English teacher , go check pappers in the 3rd grad class

and stop reading these nasty stories you dumb fucking cock sucker. Colleen I gave you a 5

Delightful twist!

You've just described what I've fantasized about, though in very different ways: Jumping yourself into one of your stories. Sometimes I wish I could do that when I've plotted myself into a corner, because a dues ex machina is SO much easier than either plotting your way out or admitting you went down a blind alley and having to back up anywhere from a couple of thousand to several thousand words to go in the direction you should have gone to begin with. Enjoyable story, though.

Always listen to your characters when they talk. They often know the story better than you do!

Nice story. How about in the next one Michelle has a run in with a new student teacher,catfight,stripping,spanked and fingered til the young girl has an embarrassing orgasm. Thanks

"Knock, knock".

"Who's there"? NOBODY is reading this absolute silly drivel.

Oddly good..

I really disliked the middle of this story. I hated both the narrator and the king of Nerds by that time, the ending however redeemed the story for me some what.
Congratulations on making me feel that revulsion you spoke of but even now as i write this I am not wholly sure the effect has worn off, in fact I don't think i like any of the characters in this tale much... I would have liked to like KOAN et. al. in the end but your earlier descriptions stayed with me.
I love the style and uniqueness of your writing but sometimes the content leaves me feeling like I need a cleansing afterwards.

what a zinger!!!

Talk about a Twist? This has to be the ultimate gotcha. I have to admit I was pulled in and set up for a masterful con. Rather than issue a spoiler alert, or offer a mea culpa, I will just say, Take the time to read this story, you won't regret it or miss the time.

well done.

Wow. Sorry I missed this fine tale when it was new

This author has some genius qualities that he incorporates into his thoughtful stories. Even a short one like this packed a powerful punch that made me think. I don't know about everyone else, but I didn't see the twist coming until the end. I had to re-read it after and say ,"Aaaah! I see". Nicely done.

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