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Still one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read.

A frequent reread, this is still one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. It would make a wonderful book.

a tender love story

If you want to smile and feel good, read this story!

Many_Memories

nailed it.

Never Settle
for
Good Enough.

Ahhh

That was a greatly satisfying read. Plot. Character development. Tension with the protagonists. Wanted more but the ending was what is was meant to be. A score somewhere beyond 5.

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

"words can't express"? Dialog could have helped.

...unless it was as dull as the descriptions of the sex (I found myself wondering if the author had actually ever HAD sex).

Sorry to be so negative, but I found nothing in it to be positive about.

-Rei

What A Story!

I probably said this before, but you are one hell of a writer with one hell of an imagination. I loved this story, it had my emotions all over the place. You are a very creative individual. This is one of those stories that I wish kept going on and on.
The only bad part of this story is that it ended. I guess I am a romantic at heart and this is a true romantic story. Thank You for such a brilliant story.

Beautiful!

Oh my... this may become my favourite story of yours yet! Beautifully written. I'm in love with every colourful character already.
Thank you. Xo

A truly lovely work by a very talented writer.

I loved the flow, the theme and the pace. A leisurely stroll by an an artist with words. Outstanding and the best I have read on this venue in any genre. Please keep more coming!


RI

''smells like real life''

This story is mainstream class.keep up the good work.i seroiusly felt related to the characters.you made me feel for them.that's the ultimate success for a story

I'm envious and sorry.

To be dating a young woman, how delightful. I think any guy would love to instruct a teen in making love and lust. Your story doesn't make it out to as creepy as it really would be. Was it Autuoms mom who wants to have coffee, yup jump on that plan. Have two women for a change. Would it be wrong to keep up appearances, and juggle some situations, or has this you g love gone to far
OH catching a long story at the begging I would expect some drop off. There are many good stories to distract us, thats whythe suggestions for longer chapters.

Awefully Awesome!

I am 18 (19 next month), and i've been reading Literotica whenever i had time since i was sixteen. Well, girls do need something to get off. But of all the stories that i've read none of them made me cry. This one, sir, took buckets of water from my eyes. This is the real "erotic" story.

Thanks so much

Thanks to everyone for the comments. I'm delighted that this one has reminded people of their own experiences watching and/or performing FORUM. And a quick response to the last comment: Jack is based on a couple of actors I worked with, one of whom was indeed Hysterium the second time I did the show, but neither of whom was Jack Guilford.

what happened

I just finished your epic "Boston to Birmingham" to find this one left dangling in the air.

Trying to find a complementary adjective for my title line, but they have all been used by other commenters!

Possibly the greatest testament to the quality of this story is the fact that it has generated 60 comments in the 15 days since it was posted, and they are 100% positive. Compare that with many other good stories with high scores which haven't managed to garner half as much praise in several years!

Of course, someone will eventually complain that it doesn't have enough sex, but I think the sole sex scene strikes the perfect balance. A story posted in the Romance category should have more heart than sex, and this one certainly does. Those looking for stroke tales have plenty of other categories to root through.

Excellent work, DC.

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