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Latest 15 Reader Comments
Hehe
I like it.
total change of tone and content
very mature well written passionate poem, very nice!
enjoyed your lovely voice
sweet poem
Aussie , who'll win the Ashes , Cook or Clark ??
---Ashes9
no comments?
and from what I have read of yours, this is your besr so far. Was the attempt a sonnet? I'm not very good at identifying forms, but I liked this one :)
Voice allows
Here's mud in your eye dear old friend,
a toast to those bridges we've burnt,
5ed
I was going to make some crack
never mind
just 5ed
Nothing at All?
it inspired a pretty good poem than everyone can appreciate..... There are many firsts in life, but losing ones virginity is one we all remember.... Thanks for sharing yours...
Oh, Lilhi, thank you!
But you still sound like Mini Mouse, a sexy little Mini. Thanks for giving voice to my poem.
WHO CAN STOP A BODY FROM PERSPIRING
one can always cause it. TK U MLJ LV NV p/s no stars available
Thank you...
This poem resonated with me very powerfully, as I am a HSP (Highly Sensitive Person) also and likewise have felt sometimes as if there's no place in this world where I can really belong.
That pain makes you a good poet!
Great job!
I would love to know more
if he did it and how it made you feel.
Then what!
I want to hear more! Can I please? What happened to the tree?
Makes my heart beat faster
There is a happy ending "Yes" even though i enjoy dark poems much more, this "Yes" made me exhale. Good job!