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nice story. hope it ends as a threeway abf

I like the story but I don't think izzy is at fault here. She is pissed at her cheating husband and taking it out on Millie. I'd rather see them work it out and izzy begin to pull her weight breastfeeding the kids and the adults.

What?!

Oh no you didn't! Emma & Sam? So sad! I know they & the Greys have gotten older in your stories, but they really didn't in my head. Their children got older, but to me, they didn't. Weird, I know. I think people saying it's too short just got used to you posting 3 chapters combined. :P

Emma and Sam?

Oh no! What happened to Emma and Sam? Was there a story that I missed?

Short

This chapter was good but way too short.

AWSOME

LOVED UR STORY. It was so AWSOME!!!

Please please please please finish this!!

Lighten up, folks.

Australia is a big country.... Just because the Australians you know don't speak that way doesn't mean someone doesn't speak that way in Australia. I'm American, and a military brat. I can tell you after moving every four years for the first 18 years of my life that the dialect of English spoken in Texas is not the same as the one spoken in Maryland. The language changes even from Dallas to small towns in TX. So, while you may be Australian, don't be offended by the fact that the author portrays a different dialect than you're used to. That's like a New Yorker being upset because they portrayed the American in a story speaking with a southern drawl. We don't all speak like that..... No, but the American portrayed in the story does.

Good story

I was glad you let Rafe retire to the ranch at the end of the story. The life of a lot of Town Lawmen was not to good and many died because of the job and the people they had to face. The story ended on the right note. 5 Stars

THE OLD WEST WILL ALWAYS BE POPULAR

great authors make it interesting and true...TK U MLJ LV NV

will there be more

love this story! But am hoping that there will be more to come.

Very good

Enjoyed the story so far but see another chapter. Sounds like a lot of the stories that are told in this part of the country. History at it's best.

Great Storytelling

Appreciate the good work. It has a lot of parallels in my life working in Cali and Tokyo.

Nice bit of cliffhanging

Will the rustlers surrender? Not likely! Will the guest be some English Lord and suitor for Kathleen. I am wondering if the bond is as strong as it appears and perhaps Pia will be added into the equation....

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