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Clitoretica on
Literotica !!!!
Cunnilingus as
Poetry ?!?!?
Ah , what a fine
Charmer , Uncle Francis was !!!!!
BadKat
Not sure about the poetic value here, but the honesty of the writing is very appealing, even more than in your other two poems, which I also like as apparent expressions of your innermost feelings.
Ashesh9
I was using a metaphor to compare my lovers kiss to a captor and my heart a captive; and yes Stockholm is reference to Stockholm Syndrome where the captive falls in love with the captor. So in this case my heart falls for my lovers kiss.
This is about " Stockholm" syndrome ?
Where hostage falls for her male Kidnapper ?!?
aw cum on
not a great effort here, odd capitalization scheme also
As they say: Practice makes perfect!
ty. I shall edeavo to do better... Have you read SHEARCHING FOR THE SMILE?
Thank you, I shall endeavor to do better.
Please read, SEARCHING FOR THE SMILE?
AN ENIGMA NO WAY
a necessity.....Oh Yes.....TK U MLJ LV NV
Liked it
nice
:)
liked this one
here you leap beyond
poetry into the realm of truth. Very well done!
some very nice moments here
"You will kiss me just long enough to take my breath
Then pull away and leave me suffocating
You are a thief of bliss,
Yet, I keep coming back."