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Love it

John is my ideal man. His cock size is immaterial but the scale of his body and hirsuteness gets me hard.

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Fantastic

Great storytelling. Love the dynamic between them. More please!!

I love cocks

And I love guys sucking their cocks and fucking my arose ....I love it

continue? please!

Would like to see this story finished. Please give us a happily-ever-after! It was a good start but really needs to be completed.... at least for my peace of mind :o) Please!

I loved it

Absolutely brilliant MJ. Looking forward to more of the same. Loved it

awesome

So good just could not put it down till i read it all high five

I'm 64 too

I wish I could have joined all of you.

17 and looking for it !

I was on my own & working the mardi gras. I was taken home by an older guy for some hanging out. We eventually retired for the night, so I thought ! But soon he was all over me & I liked what was happening so I kept on with it. He nibbled my ears, then kissed my neck and on to my nipples for awhile and I got hotter and hotter. On to my rib cage edges and down to my fur line ever so slowly. ll the while, his hands were wondering everywhere ever so lightly and my temperature went up even more. All of a sudden he planted a firm kiss square on my lips but I was shocked and resisted this. He did not relent or let up and was very firm, all the while his tongue was trying to force it's way into my mouth, At last I relented and opened up a bit and we kissed more and more. Now I was getting smoking hot and loosing any idea of resisting his advances. He massaged me everywhere with great smoothness and nibbled on the head just a brief moment and then touched my anus and asked if he could play there. I was by this time breathless, quivering & and said yes. After much gentle massaging & kneading, he inserted one finger ever so slowly into my rectum. Around and around then in and out, all the way out. Then like a flash back in all the way. I was by this time in paradise, then he added another finger for a while & a third after that. This was followed by four fingers tightly grouped together like a wad and the gentle ramming started . By now I was willing to take in the Queen Mary as I was in 7th heaven and loving it. All this time he was kissing me and tonguing me deeply & probing my sensitive areas with his free hand. I thought I would pass out from ecstasy and anticipation. We were in missionary position when he started to mount me and proceeded to force into me. I was more than willing as he inched in a bit at a time. About a third of the way in, I needed more quicker so I placed my heels on his buns and pulled him in all the way. It hurt a bit but it thrilled even more. We waited just a bit but kept kissing. Then he started moving in and out to establish a rhythm. I was by now high just from the sensation & nearly breathless. After some time he asked if I could change my position so he could get in real deep, to which I said yes. I raised both my legs over my head and behind my shoulders like a yoga position and we went at it hot and heavy for quit sometime. He asked if it would be alright to have an orgasm deep in me & I agreed as all I wanted at this point was to get it all, forever & ever. What hot kissing, ramming and sex !! I came so much & was now a broken in bottom and still love it very much ! But, I like sucking cock too !

Hmm...

I like the story so far, so don't get me wrong when I say... at least for now, both Dalton and Conner don't seem to be all that great. They have fought over Neil like a piece of meat, in front of him no less. Alone, they have some nice qualities, though. I like them for that. It's interesting that Dalton accepted Neil so easily even after the talk about how his father died. Neil was a bit harsh towards Conner at the end there. I would say that both, Conner and Dalton, try too hard. *shrug* I dunno. I enjoy the story regardless. Hope to read the next chapter soon.

Fuck yeah!!!

Very hot story!!! Had my cock hard through the hole thing

NICE

I do not think that I enjoyed it as much as some of the other commenters, but it was nice

Yes

Give as more, now that the 1st time is done, Who continues to enjoy each other, sound like most of them will.

Any more?

Loved it, is there any more coming?

It needed that 4th part! I'm glad you went with it. It was a great move to see Ryan's POV b/c it gave us a more balanced feel for the couple and where they were coming from. I liked seeing the characters developed fully through that method. I liked the way you had things work out so well, what with the chance to go into business for themselves (and it helped balance that boss/employee dynamic b/c it was all Jake who hooked them). The way they were able to keep the house (and the piano ;) was nice too. Overall, I enjoyed it alot and I am so glad you did part 4 b/c without it, it didn't feel finished. And I was happy to see you take it so seriously b/c you could have tried to rush an ending since you had planned for 3 parts. Instead you let it play out in a very thorough way. That made the story much stronger.

I have to say, there were times when Jake got to me a bit when he didn't stop joking all the time. There were no serious discussions about their relationship. It wasn't until their business move and then the marriage discussion that he didn't joke. I think it must have been tough on Ryan at times, but he loved him enough to deal with it. I think he's something else to not at least ask Jake to take things seriously on occasion. Afterall, you don't want to change someone to be with you, but I think he really did come off as immature at times when NOTHING was serious to him. I found it interesting that he'd have some serious thoughts in his mind, but always go for humor outloud.
great work, MJ

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