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Great story, great sex......

Can't wait to read the next series.....well written, edited and so enjoyable

Beautiful

This is just a beautiful story. I return to this often and read it, and each time I find a little something else to love about it. Thank you for writing it.

Bravo

I haven't read anything on here in at least three years. I haven't posted anything in even longer than that. Thank you for making my return such a beautiful one.

Your characters are mostly clear-cut and entirely believable. Sell that and you can sell any emotional journey. I also appreciated your balance between erotica and straightforward storytelling very much. You created an intensely erotic connection... but didn't get stuck in two hot men fucking each other six ways to Sunday on every page. You gave them a real world with interesting backgrounds and terrificly imperfect lives. Above all, your scent and heat spell mesmerised me - bravo. I love that sort of thing. It makes everything else - love and sex included - feel more real and intense.

You have my vote for the Valentine thingy.
Thank you again.
AH

Thank You!

I just wanted to tell you "thank you" for writing such a wonderful story. It's very nice but sexy as well ;) I couldn't stop smiling! You should definitely write a continuation, no matter how big, but it has to be! Will be looking forward to reading it)

sucked

your story sucked more than you did in the story.
You need to describe how that cock felt on your lips, tongue and how you thought you were choking on it. If it was that big you couldn’t breath with it in your throat.
Ill tell you something, suck a big dick before you try righting about one.
You said nothing about the dildo going into your ass, don’t you think that was important?

HOT

Please write a (longer) sequel for this, one of the hottest I've read here!!

Not really into them not being monogamous, but I guess Daniel still has a girlfriend and they don't have a defined relationship anyway. But still, as always great writing and an awesome story!

As always, I love your stories.

You have great stories and this one is no exception. You write on a broad spectrum of topics but I love the bisexual and cuckolding stories the best. You have the patience to do the details. My story was just too quick to the orgasm because I was in a hurry to cum. Keep up the great work.

Sissy

I enjoyed this quite a bit. I only thought that Ethan should have been a bit more upset at the way he was manipulated at the exhibit. I don't believe Afton didn't see that result coming and want it. I also think that the fact he'd make him have unprotected sex with all those men was sick. Aside from those details, and overall, the series was very good. I'd check out your other work.

Just...absolutely stunning!

How is it I have not read this story before? I have been a fan of the M/M story for awhile now, and have read all the good ones, so I thought, until I stumbled across this one last night. 7 hours of reading later, I collapsed in sleep at 5:30am, only to wake up, and ditch church, of all places(!), to finish. And just, wow. I am speechless. This story series made me cry so hard (in both sad and happy ways) I don't think my eyes will look normal even a week from now. Loved how each new chapter started with present day, and we got to see Mike and Joe today, and how everything has worked out, but damn, the 10 chapter emotional ride to get us there was just something else. I don't think I've ever been so happy that 2 characters ended up together, but yet so sad that I won't be spending more time with them. Thank you so much for a fantastic read. Cannot express how much this story moved me!!! --pentopaper (just not logged in :)

This story is pure perfection. The hot scenes, the chemistry between David and Daniel, the team, everything. I love how intuitive Daniel is about David's feelings, how he can read his mind. I love how he can just give up and let everything go for David. This story has brought me to tears so many times! I may be a straight female but this series has got to be on my top 5

Astoundingly Clever!

You've allowed Daniel to integrate his beloved David into the jock world. David is now a real person in the land of giants. Masterful writing throughout the chapter. I especially loved the shower scene. I loved the sexual tension flowing between David and the jocks within the shower. Your characters are filled with such passion, cerebral depth, and an emotional core that far distances them from other stories on this site. You've made David and Daniel real to me. I think about them and worry about them throughout my day.

One Word

Perfection. That is what this story is.

wish if was me

I would love to experience this. I'm in San Antonio Texas. And have been curious about this for some time.

I love this story

I've read it multiple times. That being said the glaring issue of Sage/Shawn/Sean needs to be addressed. The story opens with John, a man Eric has presumably known for years, asking when Eric will replace his slave whom Eric refers to as Sage. Why does John believe Eric is a master? Later in the series Corey reads an email in Eric's computer from Shawn to Eric, who is Shawn? If the Sean who arrives for a visit at Corey's request was Eric's slave, why does he question how Corey found out about him. Would he not have known he wrote that farewell email to Eric? Finally the email is upsetting because if Sean was indeed Eric's master then who sent that email to Eric? Does Eric have dual personalities, and to further his belief that he is a master wrote and sent the email to himself? An inquisitive reader is going to ask these questions, because the cause of them interrupts the continuity of the story. Please work on checking your names, and events in each of your stories. This one seemingly irrelevant part of the story mars an otherwise amazing love story.

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