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Re: anonymous

Take your anonymous ass back inside the toilet drain where it belongs and is safely hidden. How's that for a closeted slut?
There, no fancy words!

I loved this

I wish there were more stories like this where the twink is the top and shattering the stereotype that the smaller "weaker" effeminate man has to be the bottom. Loved it.

I have to agree that the story felt a bit rushed at the end and would have loved a more drawn out sex scene and possibly a bit more development. But 5 stars is five stars.

Beautiful

Your story was fantastic,it matches my way of thinking. I have sucked a few cocks but the last one I sucked was the greatest ,it was 8 ins long and very thick.I met him on line and went to his house to meet him thinking that maybe I won't get to suck him off,but what a surprise I got,not only did I get to suck his cock but he sat on my face so I could lick his asshole then I sat on his cock which felt wonderful inside me.He then asked me would I like him to fuck me which I agreed to it was fantastic. Keep in mind I am Bi and have been married for 50 years and only started going with men about 3 years ago after watching a few gay porno's and realizing what I had been missing all my life. O what a beautiful life.

Fuckin hot

That is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. So visually descriptive. Definitely 5+ stars!

I have read each of your stories at twice. I find comfort in the different characters. Thank you. Keep writing.

re:orion

shut the fuck up idiot, how's that for quick and short, no fancy words required

Rebuttal to the imbecile.

Wow! much needed use of the thesaurus by Jackass90 here, yet it brought no good as even copying the spellings can be a big task for some lame asses. Let me begin with the simplest things for your dim mind here:

1. You pointed out that my grammar committed faux pas. Get yourself an English tutor as your numbing brains need one desperately! Proof as follows:-

a. It's gargantuan not gargantuous; and the sentence would be gargantuan grammatical faux pas NOT gargantuous grammar faux pas.
b. "Eric’s vicissitude of heart is something that is inferred to have been fourth coming especially once Beth approached him." - the word is forthcoming.
Viz a viz- your doomed professional life is forthcoming.
c. "As explain (not explain, EXPLAINED) within the story when Claire spewed all that mess and it became a huge seen (not seen, SCENE) Austin was upset with the situation."


Now, coming to the detail part of the story, which is obviously going to be a hard task for your head, I finished reading this chapter because one finishes something that they begin with, only losers leave the things amidst. Evidently your swollen brains didn't notice me mentioning that I had read the first two chapters which were quite good and since the third chapter was supposed to be the last one of this triology, I read it completely.

Secondly, my question to the author was that someone like Eric who has been abusive and manipulative for years, just changes his mind in mere hours without any massive external or internal force or influence. Just Beth approaching him doesn't justify such a tremendous transformation of mind and behaviour which has been cultivated over the years.
I am sure that your tiny brain doesn't possess any hint of knowledge as to how the human psyche works.

About Austin, the reason for him to leave Ryan and the Davenports was Claire's outrage and Ryan's outburst that lead Austin to think that he was the cause of the family dispute and his self-blame that wherever he'd go, he'll bring sorrow (something that he acquired by the occurrences post his escape from Eric).
This was the reason that he went back to antagonist Eric.
My question was, when Eric freed Austin, the aforementioned reason wasn't dealt with in the story. Why didn't Austin think that he had caused a family dispute and that he would bring sorrow to Davenport family whilst going back to Ryan after being freed by Eric at last? This was the sole reason that he had abandoned Ryan and the family in the first place, right? Where did this reason vanish altogether? And Austin didn't think once about that 'destruction' that he thought he were going to bring to Ryan's life and just drifted his car towards Levy? Not even when he was en route for 12+ hours!

Lastly, I never said that the spelling mistakes or grammatical errors took away from the story. You see, when one hopes to become an established writer, these things hold a great value.
It was advised as a supplement for the greater good of the author.

Honestly you are a mockery of yourself jber90. Talk about brainless shit and your head is perfect example of one. It's obvious that your limp dick is the major organ in your body and sadly that's also fails its functionality.
Seriously I pity your existing or to be employer. Get real dickwad, it is people like you that embarrasses our kind and causes people to be homophobic.

This story is getting better and better.

At least Neil is coping well with the unfairness life has given him. I just hope he doesn't ever feel like he has to make due with second best. Conner instead of Dalton, painting instead of playing the violin. Neil is a sweet, gentle soul who deserves happiness in whatever form he can find it.

Next chapter please..

Please write the next chapter. How many more years you need? This is my first ever comment even though I've been reading literotica for 5 years. Feel honoured..😀

love

I love it keep going on . Love your dad I wish i good

That's so me

Just had to comment on this story (hopefully a series of 10 stories as promised). I so relate to this cock slut. I too am a cock slut. I recently joined the YMCA and when in the sauna or steam room I stare at all the naked cocks and dream about getting on my knees and serving one or all of them. Unfortunately (or fortunately) it hasn't happened. not because I don't want it to, but because nobody ever noticed my hungry looks, or if they did, ignored them.Some Day!!!

Bravo!

It was a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Nice ending, a true love story.

Curious to old friend

To "old Friend" I am married and had done just exactly what
You described. I too are looking for a good
Looking clean married man that would give me
Some pleasure and the same in return. I would
Love to take a cleaned stiff cock back into my
Tight man pussy again. When I was in puberty,
I have only sucked on one
Other mans cock. I loved it !! I let him enter
Me about an inch or so. I would love to do this
Again. So, "old Friend" if your interested in
Having another married friend I would certainly
Love to entertain a visit or call.
I'm Curious are you ?

Loved it

I'm a sucker for a happy ever after in stories and you have delivered it with this. Wonderful, loved it. Hope you decide to write more stories, you have a great talent.

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