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Amazing

I actually thought that this was the best one of the three so far. I'm not really fond of the Mother character as I feel there hasn't been a lot of character development with her. I thought Melissa was written beautifully and that scene with Paulo was fantastic. It managed to be not just sexy but sensual in a way that was not only arousing but interesting to read.

I felt the scene with the two kids were a bit rushed and badly written in comparison to the scene with Paulo. There wasn't enough detail and I feel that there wasn't enough time really dedicated to that scene which also could have been amazingly hot. I did think that Melissa was fantastic throughout.

I really enjoyed this story and am glad I have favourited you as an author as I think you're doing really well! I'd love Melissa and Ben to go to a sex club at some point and enjoy people together!

a bit personal

I have a friend just like Emily, she's my best friend and just behaves the way Emily did (before the sex fest :P). Needless to say i do have a crush on her.. Great story could connect to it.

ps. I m still a teen nd i hope dt my best friend and me hit it off.. 😊

very hot

I wsih I was dave in this story

Thanks for your comment, Anonymous. The former was definitely a typo - poor editing by me. The latter is licence - obviously a failure on that one.

decent story

decent story, I enjoyed it. maybe if we had nothing to read due to all the negative comments, you all would have to stroke to your minds,,,buttholes

I liked it

Not always consistent - but it's a good story with a lot of nice action, I liked it lot. 5 stars, keep on!

The foursome!

It would be great if you actually wrote them having the foursome teased at the end!

I'm getting used to your style...

I realise you like to build up towards the sexual encounters, and I enjoy reading about that just as much as the frantic, lust-driven action in the bedroom. My only observation - and it's a personal preference, not a criticism - is that the writing might be tightened a bit, especially in those early scenes. I have the same feeling about the structure of some of your other stories, all of which I've enjoyed.

since you asked

OK, here we go. First, I haven't checked to see if you did other stories, so I don't know if you have, or are willing to, write incest. If you're looking for ratings, there's a reason it's one of the biggest genres on the site. And you implied, even if you didn't mean to, that Melissa was considering it when she kept taking notice of her mom"s body. Also, you closed the story too abruptly. After the first two, which I do beloeve were better, you owed the reader more. If she cheated again, there should not be a "I never told him" aspect to it. She told him before, he knows she has that tendency, she should tell him again. And his escapades with her family can't possibly be kept secret either. He will be found out, so he should just find a way to break it to her. Ideally, imho, after a good buildup, he should be the 'family man' if you get my drift. Just my opinion, but I think it would help ratings. Good luck.

Felicity

If I had to pick a reason the first two were better its Felicity. Now Melissa turning into a little slut is enjoyable too.

Wish I Was Her

I really enjoyed the story. It was nice the way they respectfully fucked her together and remained friends. I've been trying to find 2 or 3 male friends to give me the same thing with no luck. Hope you write more.

hot!

hot, hot, story. can't wait for more of Sonia's adventures.

Autor's Question

Please comment on this piece. What is less enjoyable about this one versus the other two. Is it the main character? Is it the sex scenes? Is it the details? Please let me know. The fact that it is scoring so much lower than the other two in the series means that I did something something wrong with this story by comparison. Constructive criticism is needed for me to improve my work.

Thanks for any support.

P.S. If you like it please rate it highly, so that it will make up some ground on the score.

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