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Good story line! I would love to read more...

Incredible!

Awesome story! Hot as hell! I loved it!

Awful!

Even the sub-heading - says candy store and it's set in a bakery!

Lots of people can write hot sex scenes

But this one has some plot too. Well done.

More please!

Patiently waiting for further updates ^^* keep up the good work!

Best story on the site, bar none. Don't let the shithead who always votes *1* fuck it up. I can't believe a woman didn't write this story!

In Response to Pissing Anon

Glad you liked it, but that's not my thing. I'm sure you can find that stuff somewhere else on this site.

Another Good Story Unended

I've read four of your stories so far, and only the shortest one seemed to have a credible stopping point. All of the others, this one included, just leave you dangling. It's sort of like being engrossed in a good television story that stops mid-sentence with no further explanation.

I like the way you write, but if after I've read a couple more of them, I am still left dangling, then I will turn to a different writer - probably one not as prolific, but someone who has the willingness to bring his story to an ending point.

GandolfTheWise

LIke to try this

Great story and a fantasy for us as well............

what a great story.
imaginative, interesting, well written.
I loved it.
thanks.

Good visuals - and THAT's all- coulda been a 4+, resulted in a 2+

Fractured sentences, confused genders/pronouns, broken logic... proof read it!

Oh...the possibilities!

Like this one and it has so many places to go.

ends too soon

Unless there is a sequel this is a letdown.

Pretty hot!

What a great opportunity to enjoy both women. A sequal would be great. Maybe he can enjoy treating both of them to a thorough licking, sucking and tongue fucking of each of their tight assholes. 5 stars.

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