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A bit confusing.

Trying to discribe what three people are doing at the same time gets a little confusing,
I liked it because you kept each person in the text. They certainly were "O" hunting, & found them in plenty.

Thanks for a good read.

im jealous

my sister did this started with two young kids but they kept phoning in mates all night to gang bang her till she was so sloppy and weak but she let them keep line up then a father took her home and his mates fucked he r all week end and tomorrow im going over to the garage party I bet her ican beat her record

The concept has potential...but...

I thought the concept had great potential...and may even be some storyline I may pursue at some point, but unfortunately this story seemed more like a vindictive rant than having any actual 'realism' or entertaining drawn out plot.

I'm not saying to give it up, but passing the story by an editor or three may gain you some experience and pointers on playing out the story to be a bit more involved...

Great conclusion

Switching over to the announcer narrative for a scene was brilliant, especially with the cameo. This was an exhausting read, in a good way, I feel like I just watched an epic sports movie. If only they made movies like this!

Great story!

I really enjoyed this story; you certainly have some talent! Again, the editing could be improved, but the story and frankly, enjoyable characters really made for a great read.

Thanks!

Amazing!

Ch. 02 really won me over. Mai Lin for the win! Can't wait for the conclusion, I think I'll read it right now.

Update

Hi everyone, thank you so much for the very supportive comments and for checking in on the status of chapter 9. Unfortunately it is taking me longer to complete than I had hoped. And with family coming into town for the next three weeks I'm not sure how much I will get done. I hate keeping you waiting but I think it will be worth it in the end. I don't want to rush it and sacrifice the quality. So please rest assured that I am working on the story every chance that I get and as soon as I'm done I will post it. I'm thinking probably the last week of August or first week of September. I really do love the fact that you are enjoying the story. Enjoy our summer and stay tuned!

What a hot fantasy come to life.

A real gem!

I loved the flow of the story, and the attention to details that grabbed and kept my attention from start to finish. Well done.

MUY CALIENTE!!!!!!

OH THE HOTNESS (is that a word LOL) of these stories...each one a smoldering ember in itself..keep on writing them!!!!!!!

This was an extremely hot, well done story. One can only imagine what happened between them after leaving the club

Interesting

Ties in with at least two other stories. Keep it up.

It's been a while

Realy liked your story, characters and build up...

Too bad you stopped !

Please keep it up !

Anyway thanks for your work

I hope there's going to be a part 3!

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