Thanks, Harry

:)

Good job

Love your poem.

Love!

I'm partial this poem Neo since I play the violin. The comparison of the bow making music and lyrics in calligraphy for the song is splendid.

Beautiful. I especially like the last line.

Sad, heartfelt cry of neglected loneliness -----

sincerely hope things improve ---A9

Frightening thought...

You'll find the problems you fear
Sooner than they will find you.

Ouch!

Role playing can be a bitch...

I hope you enjoy yourself though.

I read an article

Not so long ago detailing this phenomena. That despite the fact that we have more means of communication, we aren't communicating the way we were intended too. The new generations of children showing less empathy towards other human beings due to the detached and personal interpretation of the current means of communication. I agree whole heatedly.

@ erectus
Even if it was just handgun calibre you wouldn't of allowed poetic license? ;-)

you may be right, they are using .45acp

for machine guns or semi (that is different from .45) but what the hell

some nice lines here, but doesn't "bolt action"

refer to a rifle, where as .45 is almost always a pistol caliber? correct me if I'm wrong. I don't think .45 cal rifles have been made since the 1880's to accompany the Colts of that era.....

Attagal !!! very , Aptly

put ! 5-ed .

Sometimes the good ones slip through the cracks...

Its worth reading two or three times.... there is so much hidden in between the words of every line.