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Excellently said x

It's a subject that bothers us all and as 'bare' usually involves some degree of pain, I agree - leave the hair! Great fun x


this time its the wearers choice. TK U MLJ LV NV


it will be best if you go visit her. TK U MLJ LV NV

Touching and beautiful

You had me hooked in for the whole ride on this poem, loved it 5ed

Made me titter!

I will apologise in advance, I have every intention to riff-off of this ;-)

Thank you for the enlightenment Ash...

...I have Googled and I am now currently browsing his FB Page :-)

This is a remarkable poem, Neo. I said so in PF&D, and it's worth saying so here.

I thought that you contrasted the sensory images to effectively add to the tension.

Just to provoke some thinking about any future edit: I think you gave enough inferences throughout the poem (including the villainous "him" BTW) I'm not sure you needed to mention the Rx in S3. That said, I have a history as a gatekeeper and helper in these matters, so what was apparent to me may not be for some others.

Great poem.

sorry , Pel

U did mention Ms. Angela's name ..?! apologies to you ....

Dare to Bare ....??

Keep the Hair !!!

5-ed .


Maybe I'm just being vain by thinking you wrote this to me. I don't know. It doesn't really matter now.

I am sorry that what I did hurt and angered you. Hurting you hurt me right back. Deeply. Permanently.

I hope you are able to find the happy, fulfilling life that each and every one of us seeks.

I'll never be able to eat Ruffles again without thinking of you. You have to know that, right? :)

Goodbye, my friend.


it is not only greece

the whole world is being held hostage by Corporate agendas and greedy capitalists of all stripes. Even in communist China. Soon enough those olive trees will have a coin dispenser on all of their trunks.

Beautiful image! makes me feel as if I have observed it happening somewhere.
Too volatile the game of moon and water.
high 5ed, thanks for sharing.

nice.. lovely imagery and truth. i smile.

Poetry is more than words or grammer.
Why use new lines to imply glamour?
natural is, natural does.
no need for is or were or was.
Lovely images deftly painted,
Stylist bound, slightly tainted.

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