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Entertaining read

The writer refers to a Mr. and Mrs. Warrender in a BBC comedy series in the 80's therefore many Brits could recall these characters whilst reading. The Warrenders and their daughter Penelope (Pen) lived in middle class suburbia, very nice , very quiet , very neat and tidy not a blade of grass out of place. Daphne (played by Sylvia Kay) was a snob of the highest order, the daughter was a little "posh" as we say this side of the Atlantic. Vince the boyfriend was laid back easy going and managed a betting shop, he was a "bit of a lad". His parents dealt in scrap metal, you get the picture. Good and entertaining read and I believe the writer could go much further with these characters, easy for me to say, I am not the one sitting there many hours and writing.

And so they sailed off into the sunset to live happily ever after? No?


Please do part 2 because the story is good and it reflects on marriage and why do and husband or!wife cheat.If you going to cheat why get marry you suppose to commute with each other when there a pro@blem.


into the Sheriff of Nottingham/ TK U MLJ LV NV

I hope he wasn't retarded enough to get back together with the slut.

"How do these couples that have been together for 50 or 60 years manage? How can they stay together without getting bored, or just wearing each other out. Little aggravations build up even between the best of friends."

After being married to my wife of almost 40 years, I can answer that question with one single word. LOVE. I love my wife more than the air I breathe. I would take a bullet for her and have absorbed pain in order that she didn't. Love. It is truly that simple. Though she isn't the 110lb girl I married so many decades ago, I still feel a flutter in my chest when I see her walking toward me. Because I love her. If fucktard morons don't understand that nor have felt it, they pollute the air others could breathe.


robbing the crooks to pay the poor. TK U MLJ LV NV

Like it. Keep on writing, there's still a way to go.

Damned Good !

You handle time well; and the references to an ex-soldier are spot on as far as I can see.
Thank you


He should have refused to pay his share of the last two months rent. What were they going to do, evict him?!


Stories like yours are why I continue to read Literotica.


This need more!!

This story need more text!!


A great story this is but I expect that the war events mentioned actually happened to many of the men of the services in WW1,and of course in subsequent wars.

Communicate much? Poor communication is a weak plot device.

This plot relies on poor communication, and that is a weak, even lame, device. Yes, I know poor communication is the bane of many marriages, but its not interesting. And other decisions, like Tony kissing her, on the lips, or going for coffee with Tony instead of finding her husband? Its all just too lame to be interesting or dramatic.

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