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Little by little
These chapters seem to go by too quickly. Or maybe it's just that I was able to read a whole bunch of chapters in a row with your other stories. I'm with some other readers in that I don't like Reasa right now...hopefully that will change, if only because you have to like Liam and want to like his mate too. I am way more interested in Kothi and Pietro and the girls!
as amazing as ever
I really enjoy your writing style , story line and interactions between characters , this is a lovely series to read.
I look forward to every new piece
Check your facts....
If she's traveling from Santa Fe and going to Oregon why did she stop in Washington in the first place? That makes no sense. You also mentioned the Handford area previously which is distracting and conflicting with the 360 area code which is not used anywhere near the Handford area...if you're going to use places in reality you should learn more about them. Washington is also an amazing and beautiful place and not shitty. If you can't tell I'm a proud Washingtonian. Your story is really good but these minor details are really distracting.
Good story..
but seems that Rain falls very far from the mate category! Ignores her, allows other men to comfort her...pppfts... But then this is your version of a mated male.
As for "reliving" her rape and captivity again...was a lot much... could have just skipped to her killing Sasha and Caroline. The whole chapter could have be given to more of the story then a repeat.
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So happy to read the next installment. It has been a long time coming but it is an absolutely fantastic story! Have to say it is getting frustrating the characters are constantly fighting and stopped by self doubts vs acting out on instinct but you have a wonderful way of making your characters develop. Please please please keep the updates coming!
Loving it
I will keep reading the story sex or no sex. It is just so good I'm addicted!
5*
Hope you write the next chapter soon .I loved it
Agreed
Sex or no; awesome series, keep it coming, we'll keep reading. If people get angry because of the lack of sex, the they can shut up and leave, if there's no need, then there's no need. Good work as always.
Keep em coming!
I want more...
It's been a long time! Continue this series.
loving it...more please!
great chapter. more soon i hope!
Good but
I expected a heck of a lot more after a month's wait. If you want to post short chapters, you should post them more frequently. Even once a week would be a bit of a of long wait for one page chapters. If an author waits a month between chapters, I usually expect 2 or 3 pages, minimum.
I like your story and want to find out about your characters. I was excited to see another chapter from you. But actually reading it was frustrating because as soon as I got caught up with the characters, it was over.
I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter but if you plan to keep such short chapters, I'll either wait until you've finished the story to read it, or give up on it completely.
Woah,
The creativity is amazing. Mixed with the sense of romance, I'm pretty sure I'm in love with your story!
-Jaz
good writing hate reasa
As always, your story telling is amazing. I do not like Reasa though, perhaps we could get to her redeemable qualities soon? Adored Liam and Elina's interaction. Can't wait for Kothi's story. Not feeling Reasa at all I'm afraid, hope that changes soon. Will of course continue to read-your stories are among the best on this site!
LOVED IT
OK. SLOW THINGS DOWN A BIT AND ADD A FEW MORE DETAILS. I LOVED THE STORY BUT U RUSHED IT A BIT BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD DOWN TO THE LAST WORD. I'LL BE WATCHING AND WAITING FOR THE NEXT SAGA TO BEGIN. GOOD LUCK.