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Why do you have Bi-Beverley or Lesbian Linda. Most off-putting.

hot would not describe this story 5 stars

MOM'S NO SPRING CHICKEN INDEED BUT SHE IS A KEEPER

A wonderful love story.
Very, very erotic too.
5*
Best regards,
Retrovizor

Kinky Daddy

I enjoyed this story. It reminded me on how it was when I broke in my daughter on her 18th birthday. I thought breaking in my son was nice, my daughter was extra nice. Mmmm yes, very, very nice and loving.

started strong fizzeled out

I have to say that is the worst god damn ending I ever read .What kind of rat bastard would be like that sorry ass son, fuck the dad you don't sell out your mom period.Whatever mom wants she gets she's earned it .

Thank you!

I've been reading here occasionally for a few months - just for the purient thrill. More than a few stories are sexually arousing - I am, after all, a horny guy - but VERY few are well written. This was a rare exception.

Your narrative voice is both unique and engaging. Your 1st person narrator has an incredibly distinct persona - with a wonderfully ironic perspective. The nonlinear chronology and perfectly placed foreshadowing give the air of spontaneity, but are actually well crafted to draw the reader into your web.

But most endearingly: your diction is irresistible! From puns to allegory to hyperbole, you paint not only a vivid visual image, but a succinct emotional development of Happy's journey to moral hell - and physical bliss.

I had fun reading the story, with both a smile on my face and a fully tumescent pestle!

On a more tedious note:
Despite your narrative skill, your editing abilities leave something to be desired. There are myriad grammatical and spelling errors that need to be cleaned up. I would suggest you obtain the services of a competent editor. As a former university writing instructor, I volunteer myself - but do find someone. That third eye can be invaluable.

I hope that you are writing things other than erotica. Your gift transcends this genre.

I HATE SHORT STORIES

AND THEY PISS ME OFF. ARE YOU TOO FUCKING LAZY TO WRITE LONG STORIES, IF YOU ARE QUIT POSTING

That was AMAZING

Came for the sex, stayed for the story. I enjoyed this story a LOT. I love nudism, and the idea of incest, impregnation, this story was just perfect. I'm not into the whole piss fetish thing, but who cares? It was just a great story, cant complain. You should get paid for these stories, LOL

How do you shuffle snow?

It's errors like this that can interrupt a story's flow.

WELL WASN'T THAT A TOTAL WASTE OF WORDS

QUIT WRITING YOU FUCKING HACK THIS SHIT ISN'T WORTH THE TIME TO READ.

Good stories!!

You are doing a good job on writing these stories but you really need to have a proof reader.

hey!

Part 2 is coming shortly ^_^ Thank you all for favouriting and commenting!

Keep it Kinky!

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