Why I'm volunteering to edit: there are too many good story lines that miss the mark due to grammatical errors, typos, improper word usage. I want to help fix that. What I can do: proof read your story and suggest changes that improve readability. Areas of specialty/interest: medical/anatomical terminology (example: supine vs. prone) Stories I won't touch, beyond what I've listed below: anything that involves violence, rape or "true" incest. Please note: although I've listed "incest" and "reluctance" stories as acceptable, I'm only interested in those genres to the extent of non-blood relatives (for incest) and "well I shouldn't but I really want to" for reluctance. No blood relatives/true coercion, please. What I can do for you: make your story better. I'm not an alchemist, and I won't rewrite your story, but I can help improve stories with decent foundations. Preferred genres: mature, first time, erotic couplings and group sex (ffm preferred over mmf).