I'm a long time reader and recent twenty nine time author on Literotica. I also write endlessly at work. What's most often needed for a story to come to life is a second set of eyes to review what you've gone over a hundred times.
I'd like to suggest that you read one of my stories before asking me to edit yours. You'll get a taste for my style.
I'm happy to review grammar, structure and content. I'll do as much or as little as you like.