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Click hereThis is a photo of an illustration I did on pastel paper using Faber Castell Polychromos pencils. Original size was 20 inches by 27 inches. Unfortunately the flash has reflected a bit too much off the highlights.
I really like the way her hair flows, it works for me.
- Jake
Proportions are off a little. Many elements in your drawing are exquisite - her legs, her face, etc, but I think her torso is a bit longer than it should be, and her arms are too long as well. I did like your technique for the highlights. Keep up the good work, and before you know it, we will all be raving over you!
But the physical anatomy of the girl seems a little off. I am not an artist and not being a critic; just from a man's view the lines do not flow smoothly as they should in a nude woman exactly and I don't know just why. Body, Butt and legs just don't fit the picture of a woman. What do I know it? Just a 76 year old guy who knows beauty when he sees it.