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  • final line seems clichéd, all of those 'L' sounds work so well together,
    maybe

    while all hell is levered loose
    or is that too much alliteration

    *scratches head*

    levered loose for me might assign it as cognitive thought process, deliberate, like a philosopher, and ties it for me in with the rocks and rivers

    as opposed to the way I read all hell breaks loose
    as if his thoughts are running riot without any control

    still a definite 5

    on the invisible man (9)
  • This is more than competantly written and bordering on the poetic, but the middle - "warm breath probing" - is just not translating well for me. Breath does little to conjure up the sensation of probing as would a tongue.

    on Undress Me (1)
  • I have always had a hard time with writing poems, especially the type that have the words that rhyme on the end of each line. I am just not that artistic. This poem you have written hear reminds me of a quote my dad used to tell me. "Do not distress yourself with dark imaginings...for many fears are born of fatigue and loneliness." Whoever is the subject of this piece, I want to give them a hug. Did a good job on this patientlee. Don't know why all of a sudden you are writing poems, but I like them!
    :-)

    Sincerely, Payenbrant

    on Circular Thoughts (4)
  • " You win some, you get laid, now do what it do " ~~~ typo or auto-correct?

    " Now that its over I can finally see your true blue " ~~~ This is the 3rd poem from you mentioning seeing someone's "true blue" that I've read today. Poetry is about experimenting with phrases and playing with words. If you keep drawing water from the same well, all of your poems will sound like one another.

    on Realizing a mistake (Owning Up) (1)
  • JAM said I should give you 5 Stars on this one.

    I'm going to agree with him this time.

    on poem by a broken machine (2)
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