I noticed the skillful enjambment.
Wonderful, absolutely wonderful, although I must confess, demure, I thought the second stanza was going to be a chalk on blackboard staccato mark because that's how I feel about the chill up my spine that happens in December sometimes.
I'm not usually a big fan of short pieces, but this said a lot to me, starting with how I was abruptly stopped short with the title.
I can picture her dressed like that
Undressing like that
Feeling that sexy
But waiting for Peter. Sweet, Smart, Sexy, Lesse.
Liked the artwork,
Liked Ashesh"s comment!
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