Non-Erotic Poetry1201 Bees in the BonnetWere I a bee,
or a spider,
what words I could write;
in light or darkness
each corner would be right,
but not square.
Angled points that all connect
to lines without compare
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Watch it Harry..
..that bee stings!
title
sucks
i fived
this isn't bad, but if everyone just spent a little more time thinking, editing, and getting away from the rampant me-ism.
Here is a sad clue, the You that you are is defined and made by the Them that is aroundmore...
You can tell your poem really stinks
when even Tazz fails to comment
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