2004-03-14 (2004-02-04)

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                crowded campfire
                i withdraw and shiver
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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2004-03-14
(2004-02-04)

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ghost_girlghost_girlover 16 years ago
this one reminds me of

a passage I heard someone quote and I paraphrase---

"I would rather sit on a pumpkin and have it to myself, than be crowded upon a jeweled cushion..." something like that. Thoreau perhaps?

I also enjoy quiet times of reflection, without the intrusion of others' inane jabber. But other times, I find being alone very lonely. We are human...

well done SJ

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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Six words that bring so much meaning. Well done.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Clarity

I know nothing about haiku but I love the visual image created by such a sparse rendering. Like looking at a photograph. Lovely!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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aesthetic austerity

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