3rd season

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4degrees
4degrees
40 Followers

overdone flow
like a train
downhill

this aint no trainwreck,baby

effects and falling leaves
cold air draws you near
keeps you in the warmth of me
indefinetly
here, we are

steps silent upon the
crispness of fall
memory of a budding
green spring infiltrate
my mind, looking over what
we'd once done
setting those wheels in motion
fueling this train
where are
my two
word lines?
overflow its known as
unable to find the
shut off valve
not possible to
stop it all, at all
my passion glows
like coals
on fire forever
for you.

4degrees
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SOMEONE STOLE THE HANDLE

and hid the key. TK U MLJ LV NV

z3n_Masterz3n_Masterover 16 years ago
I’m available -- just not for you

My skin is flayed<br>

every nerve<br>

raw<br>

exposed <br>

to you<br>

don’t touch<br>

please don’t touch me<br>

as long as I can recall<br>

i’ve always felt this way<br>

contageous<br>

unclean<br>

<br>

Dirtified in <br>

your presence<br>

dirtified by <br>

ur lack of presence<br>

<br>

Im available<br>

but not for you<br>

im available<br>

but not<br>

im unavailable<br>

at all<br>

<br>

Jesus Christ alone<br>

can’t save me<br>

its all there<br>

a thousands years<br>

living under<br>

a millenia of sins<br>

nerves are raw<br>

and i feel ur thoughts<br>

pressing deep<br>

<br>

Youve dirtified my mind<br>

i knew it all along<br>

dirtified my soul<br>

with your burning <br>

<br>

Im not here<br>

unavailable<br>

to your touch<br>

I’m available<br>

but not for you<br>

your love<br>

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Mysterious overflow...

Passion endures ~ no way to turn it off ~ it's on burning like coals - on fire forever.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Despite protestations to the contrary

It felt like it devolved into an emotional train wreck.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
That last stanza rocks !!!

I love it !!!

I feel the build up, then you stick it to us

... good n naughty. Like a house on fire

with no way to put it out. Just a hot lil poem !!

I love your writing,

give me more !!! * Grins *

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