- Non-Erotic Poetry
- 5:28 PM
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Click herein the simple act of
sliding my hand in yours
praying and hoping for
your heart's acceptance
all my hopes and dreams
of what we once shared
were
SHATTERED
when you
pulled your hand
away
my
last
heartbeat
of
love
5:28 pm
- COMMENTS
carolina_elleover 10 years agoAuthorjust what I was feeling at the time - that exact moment when my heart's rhythm changed.
LesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoI like the look but the my last heartbeat of love piece seemed a little out of place, maybe a different line would fit better? Make clearer the meaning?
How ingrained though are those moments we lose those we love.
Cleardaynowover 10 years agoPoignant and very interesting and effective structuring.
Thought provoking.
