6 and 9

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2rivers
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instead of seeing the Six
I saw its hole
the lower loop visible in most text
unless allowed to escape due sloppiness or haste

I was looking deep in there
no flowers but much turf,
sand and conch,
mulch is life here this day

so small the empty parts of loved
or despised numerals,
the ache of Nine
it’s heady ignorance of gravity

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Disection.

Brilliantly performed dichotomy on the numbers 6 and 9. Creative license still valid. Wonderful!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A bit of wit displayed here

Well beyond any possible crude vulgarity ~ bravo!

EpheEphealmost 20 years ago
Witty poem.

And very, very, lovely. More.

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
The erotic numbers

6 & 9 are very fine,

But 8 is great

and just won't wait.

On its side it's got to be

Alepth one infinity.

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