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a bold white canvas
a place to start from
all tied up and spooky
a link to virgins in the north
Zero is the most obvious
it should have been a flavor years ago
but now stands like a lame winter goose
on a frozen pond trying to pick it's nose
which it does not have. What is learned from humans that lean on lamp posts before being chased away by billy clubbed jack booted thugs sporting elephants holding tie pins against the wind in 1953 and 2002 too with a gun.
End of sentence.
With a fucking gun.
so the garden was just fine,
summer was fine too, it did tend to drift at times
like a too long sentence without rhyme
not enough punctuation
the last words have escaped
don't worry
they were not the vicious ones
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- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoA sea of Maelstrom winds seems to take these lines and blow them back into the past ~ images - violent and stark move this poem until it ends up in a garden in the summertime.
LeBrozover 17 years agoWith the way that sentence never ends and overwhelms, elephants make perfect sense in this humorous word play.
WickedEveabout 18 years agoI know I am the first and maybe I'll be the only one to comment. There should be more comments on this poem and the rest. I don't know what's going on with the elephants, but I know it's wonderful.
