- Non-Erotic Poetry
- a cola poem
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it tastes so good
like capitalist nirvana,
swishing it around
like a pretty one-night stand,
but it comes in a box
on-demand
without the long wait
under a Bodhii tree
the trouble is:
it doesn't last,
like a quick cigarette
the thing is past.
so rather than let
the pleasure sink,
one might say that
I chain-drink
a bad habit
is what you might see,
but there's a reason
the world's free.
see, I walk around
like a broken machine,
and no matter what I do
the pain won't leave
So it's cola rain
on the desert floor
softening the suffering
making way for Spring
- COMMENTS
buttersalmost 13 years agobut please accept apologies for not going into detail right now as i'm ill.
the very best part of this has to be those four lines at the end, though the start's strong too. seems to miss a little in the middle by comparison.
simply__mealmost 13 years agoI like, but the pain line hurts a bit. Me, not the poem, so you pulled an emotion. I don't know if this a form due to the rhyming scheme (I think you used the same in the previous poem). If you get a chance, lemme know the form in a pm or here. I'll come back and check.
