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A Comment on Haiku

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I do not enjoy
Watching a lonely snowflake
Or just one Haiku

For me, words of love
Should fall like a springtime rain
Cleansing the spirit

One must be careful
Words can burn worse than the sun
With scars slow to mend

Leaves fall from trees
Poems are forgotten too
Not dead, just asleep

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A PSEUDO HIBERNATION

for most all save us. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Words.

The power of words to cleanse the spirit, hurt others ~ mending can be difficult. The imagery here is breath taking!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Haiku built verse

Plant seeds of myriad thoughts

In open minds

Whether a single piece

Or a collection

Such unusual gems.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
A Study in 5-7-5

Interesting thoughts in a familiar structure.

The fourth is my favorite.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
A pleasant read...

...from a new writer. Well-done.

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