A faded rose

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A sunny summer morning,
A steamy August night,
Began with love and hopefulness;
And ended with shock and fright.
As we awoke and we found out
About the day before,
The shock set in; the grief began
And we felt it more and more -
The anger at those who caused this,
And at those who didn't care.
Still felt by some, it hasn't stopped
Because this isn't fair.
How different would our world be
Had this event not occurred.
The shock we never would have felt,
The crying never heard.
If this rose hadn't faded,
If this rose hadn't died,
Would we still all be happy,
And would we not have cried?
Or had she lived, would things be worse -
Not for us, but for her?
Her death horrific, yet merciful,
A blessing for the girl.
We haven't quite figured it out,
But one day we will know.
Without a doubt we'll all find out
And in our knowledge, grow

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE MOURNING FOR ONE GONE

by those remaining to climb the mountain. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
petals will fall

A beautiful rose dies ~ the crying out in shock and grief for a reason - as the petal fall and return to the good earth. This poem has an undertone of sadness, but the imagery here is lovely.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Bit of a rhyme-heavy, sing-song sound to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Dreadful

Somebody, quick! Pluck this faded rose!

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