A Fantasy Never To Be

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Seering are the eyes that behold me
Locked in a fantasy so real
Just one look could capture my heart
Lost to a passion are we

Mystified and beyond redemption am I
No guilt is felt in my soul
Only a longing to be held in your arms
Under a pale blue sky

Slowly we shall come as one
Gently shall we touch and join
Two hearts beating as wild as the wind
Under the warmth of a summers sun

Slowly I awoke from this dream and I see
A fantasy that can never come true
Yet it's dreaming that makes this cold lonely heart
Believe in the powers to be.

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KingCuddleKingCuddleover 3 years ago
"In my arms under a pale blue sky"...?

Seems achievable to me!

We have pale blue sky here in Nashville!

My arms are vacant at this time...

Does this afternoon work for you?

Tomorrow...and tomorrow...are also possible...and desirable!

(Pssst! Less is NOT more. More is Better!)

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE POWERS THAT BE

dont control only watch and accept praise. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good Start

With some careful editing, this could be a good poem. Besides a couple grammatical errors, there are some inconsistencies and many unnecessary words. Repeating "slowly" as the first word in the last two stanzas detracts from the poem. Just some friendly advice from a novice..

-Sheila

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