- Non-Erotic Poetry
- A Few Caring Thoughts
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LEMONIA/ (F)LEAP EDELTRAUD => SUMMER WILD
EN PLO 2012/2
MONDAY
25/6/2012
A FEW CARING THOUGHTS
My wife sends me a few caring thoughts,
That force me to rethink my summer plots,
My wife sends me a few clever tips,
To keep them as a safeguard on my trips.
The language of humanity she talks,
With plain words, my fallacy she knocks,
She thinks of me, she says, "take care",
What other love with hers could I compare?
My wife, of the flowers the most pure!
As always my last and only cure,
I send her back my love and a sweet kiss,
In certainty, it will not go amiss.
- COMMENTS
Tsothaalmost 10 years agoAs always, I might be reading this entirely wrong, but... I thought line 2 was humorous, in a "if it weren't those meddling kids" kind of way. :)
The fallacy mentioned in s2 l2 isn't explained in the poem, I think, but since it is knocked with her caring thoughts, I assume it was about the narrator thinking that she didn't care.
Which leads to the third stanza, which sets her as a saint... Except lines 3 and 4 are almost sarcastic, with "in certainty, it will not go amiss".
