A Foolish Question

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My body’s been Yours
A home for your tool
But I never once thought
You regarded me the fool

How long did you think
I’d put up with your shit
Despite my loving
The world’s biggest prick

Does my love mean so little?
That you could throw it away
With as much regard
As yesterdays junk mail

Obviously you think
I’d put up with more
But today my love
I have to shut that door

I’ve made excuses
To explain away
The hurt you inflict
Upon me each day

Why you do it
Has me confused;
Maybe I am…

The world’s biggest fool

I gave you me
Exactly as you wanted
No cage, No bars
No locks to be seen
I asked for nothing
Even gave up my dream

For a man who is blinded
By his own conceit
Where will you go now?
When you’re feeling so weak

To a body unaware
Of what’s in your mind
To toning it down
And Living a lie

I let you be You
And adored every part
Even when I knew
You’d stomp on my heart

I hate this feeling
You’ve left me with
An emptiness of Mind
Of body and of spirit

Why did you do it?
You stabbed me so hard
This pain I’m feeling
I can not explain

You have the key
The lock wont change
And the Butterfly weeps
Just to say your name

The distance is great
And it’s up to you
Cause I desperately
Want the man I see in you

But that’s just the fool
Who still loves who You are
Can you too, be as honest

And come this far?

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A GIRLS WORST NIGHTMARE

boys only want 1 thing. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Fini

Love as important as yesterdays junk mail. End of a love affair?

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Weak

Inconsistent structure makes no sense; detracts from what you may be trying to say.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Skakey.........

...couplets that drift in and out then fall apart completely quite early on, odd use of capitals all irritated me. I started to read but looked away before the finish. Sorry.

Tess