A Lover

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A lovers' touch
could mean so much
if it's done in the
right way.
A lovers' kiss
could be such bliss
if it didn't
fade away.
A lovers' word
could always be heard
twenty-four hours
a day.
A lovers' eyes
could never tell lies
unless he looks
away.
A lovers' lips
upon your fingertips
could leave you
with nothing to say.
A lovers' heart
is where you should start
if you really
want him to stay.
But lovers' we're not
although...I love you a lot
Maybe someday?!


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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
lovers

I will love you a lot Sunday, Monday or whenever.

GoddessOfSoulsGoddessOfSoulsover 17 years ago
Beautiful

I like this such a deepness of spirit in your words

Honey123Honey123about 18 years ago
So sweet

I truly do love this poem...but do take LeBroz' suggestions as to breaking up the verses...You will do well.

~Honey

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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And, BTW,

Welcome to Lit!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Nice sentiments - a small suggestion - break it up a bit so the reader can savor the flavor, e.g.,

A lovers' eyes

could never tell lies

unless he looks

away.

A lovers' lips

upon fingertips

could leave you

with nothing to say.

Try it out - see what you think.

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