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Click hereA Master Blower
'Ode to Artistic talent'
She is a Master Blower
Talents renowned by all her peers
A craft that is spawned through passion
Creating joy, enthusiasm, and even tears
Pursed lips lovingly caress
The tool she loves to embrace
And when it is inside her mouth
Her whole body smiles with grace
With tongue, lips, and lungs
She creates a sweet melody
Like a flutist in an orchestra
She plays a solo for the symphony
She dances as if a ballerina
Every movement precisely scripted
Holding her audience on the edge
Their body, mind, and soul euphorically lifted
Blowing with every pore of artistic feeling
Using calculated sucks for shape and preening
Excitement quivers as her task nears completion
The molten object comes to climatic convening
She is a Master Blower
Her skills are unsurpassed
A great glass-blower, craftsman, and artist
With her mouth, lips, and lungs her passion is cast
An Original Composition by:
Quivering Quill
A Scribbles & Doodles Creation
All Rights Reserved
and quite clever, even if the pun was on the edge of my mind before the denouement - nothing too wrong with predictability set in a good poetic structure. S.O.
but take a look at this and compare it with your NLP piece, now spill it out, 5 reasons why this is a better piece, you tell me QQ.
I'm in 5 mode, because you guys are starting to think. Do some more.
This was a Master-piece indeed !